Re: [Ice] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-ice-pac-04: (with COMMENT)

Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Wed, 22 April 2020 16:42 UTC

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From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
To: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-ice-pac-04: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [Ice] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-ice-pac-04: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Roman,

Thank You for the review! Please see inline.

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    COMMENT:
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    > I support Ben Kaduk's position on clarifying the state machine.  Thank you for
    > the discussion I saw addressing that issue.
    >    
    > Beyond that, editorial nits only:
    > 
    > -- Section 3.1. Editorial.  Per “It is entirely legal for …”, seems colloquial.
    > Perhaps, “Per RFCXXX, an ICE agent could provide zero candidates of its own”
    
    I will modify as suggested.

    > -- Section 5.  Typo. s/an backup mechanism/a backup mechanism/

    Will fix.

Regards,

Christer