Re: [icnrg] I-D Action: draft-oran-icnrg-qosarch-05.txt

[Akbar Rahman <[e-mail]>]

Hi Dirk/Dave,


I had read it a while ago, and have just re-read it now.  Overall, a very nice draft and I support progressing it.

Just two suggestions for editorial clarification:

- "TCP/IP" is referred to in various sections, and then afterwards the "IP protocol stack" is mentioned once in section 3.2.  Wouldn't it be better to use "IP protocol stack" as the generic reference instead of "TCP/IP".  This is because one is never sure if by "TCP/IP" you also mean to include UDP or not?  And now with the rolling out of QUIC/HTTP (which is UDP based) this distinction becomes more important.  This can become a minor or major point of confusion depending on the reader's background.  I've gotten this feedback myself on other drafts that I have written.

- Is it wise to entitle section 7.7 as "Strawman principles for an ICN QoS architecture" since strawman usually has a negative implication (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Straw_man ) ?



/Akbar


-----Original Message-----
From: icnrg <[e-mail]> On Behalf Of Dirk Kutscher
Sent: Wednesday, August 26, 2020 5:07 AM
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Subject: Re: [icnrg] I-D Action: draft-oran-icnrg-qosarch-05.txt

Hello ICNRG,

Dave has kindly updated the QoS Architecture Considerations draft, responding to earlier comments from Eve during IRSG review.

I was wondering what people think of this revision. Check out the diff to see the changes.

If we are generally happy with it, I'd like to pass it back to the IRSG on Monday, August 31st.

As a reminder, this is an individual submission, not a RG document as most of our RFCs-to-be. Still, any feedback would be appreciated, of course.

Thanks,
Dirk





On 24 Aug 2020, at 20:31, [e-mail] wrote:

> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Information-Centric Networking RG of
> the IRTF.
>
>         Title           : Considerations in the development of a QoS
> Architecture for CCNx-like ICN protocols
>         Author          : Dave Oran
> Filename        : draft-oran-icnrg-qosarch-05.txt
> Pages           : 28
> Date            : 2020-08-24
>
> Abstract:
>    This is a position paper.  It documents the author's personal views
>    on how Quality of Service (QoS) capabilities ought to be
> accommodated
>    in ICN protocols like CCNx or NDN which employ flow-balanced
>    Interest/Data exchanges and hop-by-hop forwarding state as their
>    fundamental machinery.  It argues that such protocols demand a
>    substantially different approach to QoS from that taken in TCP/IP,
>    and proposes specific design patterns to achieve both
> classification
>    and differentiated QoS treatment on both a flow and aggregate
> basis.
>    It also considers the effect of caches in addition to memory, CPU
> and
>    link bandwidth as a resource that should be subject to explicitly
>    unfair resource allocation.  The proposed methods are intended to
>    operate purely at the network layer, providing the primitives
> needed
>    to achieve both transport and higher layer QoS objectives.  It
>    explicitly excludes any discussion of Quality of Experience (QoE)
>    which can only be assessed and controlled at the application layer
> or
>    above.
>
>    This document is not a product of the IRTF Information-Centric
>    Networking Research Group (ICNRG) but has been through formal last
>    call and has the support of the participants in the research group
>    for publication as an individual submission.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-oran-icnrg-qosarch/
>
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>
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