Re: [icnrg] [nwcrg] I-D Action: draft-irtf-nwcrg-nwc-ccn-reqs-02.txt

Kazuhisa Matsuzono <matsuzono@nict.go.jp> Fri, 20 September 2019 11:07 UTC

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Subject: Re: [icnrg] [nwcrg] I-D Action: draft-irtf-nwcrg-nwc-ccn-reqs-02.txt
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Dear NWCRG community,

We've just uploaded the new draft incorporating the feedback we received.
We are looking forward to further comments if any.
A brief list of updates which specifies the modified Section and the 
content is below:
<Sec. 1 Introduction>
* Move the sentences regarding NC transport mechanism (coherent/non- 
coherent NC) from Sec. 3 to Sec. 1.

<Sec. 2.2 NDN/CCN Background>
* Add two references, CCNx and NDN packet format.

<Sec. 4.1 Content Naming>
* Add a pointer to the other section since the naming considerations 
appears later, and remove some duplicated sentences.
* Move the sentence regarding compression techniques from 4.2.3 Router 
Operation to 4.1 Content Naming.

<Sec. 4.2.4 Publisher Operation>
*Add one benefit in such end-to-end

<Sec. 4.3 In-network Caching>
* Regarding the security consideration for caching, add the pointer to 
Sec. 4.5 Security and Privacy.

<Sec. 4.4 Seamless Mobility>
* Remove "rate adaptation" since the subsection pertains to seamless 
mobility.

<Sec. 5.2 Rate and Congestion Control>
* adds the sentence regarding seamless mobility.

<Sec. 5.4 Routing Scalability>
* Added a challenge regarding getting linearly independent content.

Thank you.

Kazuhisa

On 2019/09/20 18:00, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Coding for efficient NetWork 
> Communications Research Group RG of the IRTF.
>
> Title : Network Coding for Content-Centric Networking / Named Data 
> Networking: Requirements and Challenges
> Authors : Kazuhisa Matsuzono
> Hitoshi Asaeda
> Cedric Westphal
> Filename : draft-irtf-nwcrg-nwc-ccn-reqs-02.txt
> Pages : 19
> Date : 2019-09-20
>
> Abstract:
> This document describes the current research outcomes regarding
> Network Coding (NC) for Content-Centric Networking (CCN) / Named Data
> Networking (NDN), and clarifies the requirements and challenges for
> applying NC into CCN/NDN.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-irtf-nwcrg-nwc-ccn-reqs/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-irtf-nwcrg-nwc-ccn-reqs-02
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-irtf-nwcrg-nwc-ccn-reqs-02
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-irtf-nwcrg-nwc-ccn-reqs-02
>
>
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