[icnrg] Review, draft-trossen-icnrg-ip-icn-5glan

Rute Sofia <sofia@fortiss.org> Tue, 12 May 2020 14:13 UTC

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Dear Dirk, Chan, all,


here is a review for the draft (Internet Services over ICN in 5G LAN Environments
)

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-trossen-icnrg-internet-icn-5glan/?include_text=1

The draft is well written, so not much to add. Just a few additional comments and some minor typos detected. As described, the current proposal is targeted to  anycast or multicast transmission. What about N to M, which is supported in ICN and relevant to environments such as IoT?

Specifically,
Introduction:

"Through such replacement of IP routing with ICN routing, we

   capitalize on several ICN capabilities:
" - IMO it would be best to write down something as through ICN integration...

-          5GC is used but not yet defined, so replace with  5G-NextGen Core (5GC)

-          MEC is an architecture, so the definition should be more clear about it (currently, it starts with MEC is located at the edge of the network; the edge today is more than an eNodeB, so the definition needs to be made more objective).

-          One aspect that is missing IMO is the possibility to assist T2T communication. The integration of IoT and 5G benefits from a Pub/Sub approach such as the one in ICN.

-          Terminology: client/consumer/receiver; server/producer/sender should be added
3. again an IoT example would be relevant here.
5.1

"To realize the flat device nature," - to support the flat network nature?



Best Regards,


Rute Sofia

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