comments on the architecture document

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Ref:  Your note of Thu, 30 Apr 92 01:38:09 -0400

>The IETF process does not insist on everything being perfect
>before going to PS.

I am not aiming at making the document perfect. Having
a good document should be just fine. However, I certainly
object to publishing a document that has any of the following
properties:

(1) self contradictions
(2) one-sided presentations
(3) ambiguities
(4) claims without factual support
(5) technically incorrect statements

The comments I made on the Architecture document show that
the document has all five of the above properties. The IETF
process, as you correctly pointed out, shall not insist on
perfect documents. However, it shall insist on documents that
are not self-contradicting, don't give one-sided presentations,
are unambiguous, don't make unsupported claims, and don't
carry technically incorrect statements.
Yakov.