[Idr] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-18

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Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-18
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2019-04-06
IETF LC End Date: 2019-04-17
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC.

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues: N/A

Nits/editorial comments: 
    Section 3 begins "his section".  I expect that should be "This section".