[Idr] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-rfc5575bis-20: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 16 April 2020 09:02 UTC

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Subject: [Idr] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-rfc5575bis-20: (with COMMENT)
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Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-idr-rfc5575bis-20: No Objection

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I hope all routing documents are this easy to follow.  All I have are minor
nits:

Section 1:
* "... manually as well as automatically.  The latter by systems that ..." --
change ". The" to ", the", because the second half of this isn't a sentence by
itself.  Just join them.

Section 7.2:
The "TBD" here feels like it's dangling.  I realize it's dealt with in the IANA
considerations, which is Section 11.3, but I had to jump around to make sure. 
I imagine I'm more accustomed to an RFC Editor note or some such when I run
into these.  You might consider saying in Section 11.3 that this is the thing
described in Section 7.2, or vice versa.

Appendix A:
Should the copyright date be updated?