Re: [Idr] Martin Vigoureux's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-te-pm-bgp-17: (with COMMENT)

"Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)" <ginsberg@cisco.com> Thu, 20 December 2018 17:30 UTC

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From: "Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)" <ginsberg@cisco.com>
To: Martin Vigoureux <martin.vigoureux@nokia.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Idr] Martin Vigoureux's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-te-pm-bgp-17: (with COMMENT)
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Martin -

V18 has been uploaded and I believe it addresses all of the editorial issues you identified.
Thanx very much for catching these.

   Les


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Martin Vigoureux <martin.vigoureux@nokia.com>
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> Subject: Martin Vigoureux's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-te-pm-bgp-17:
> (with COMMENT)
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> draft-ietf-idr-te-pm-bgp-17: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> 
> Hello,
> 
> thank you for this document.
> I only have caught nits.
> 
> Abstract:
> s/Traffic Engineering Extensions/Traffic Engineering Metric Extensions/
> 
> To have a naming consistent with your references I'd do,
> in section 2 and in IANA Section:
> s/1120              Unidirectional Bandwidth Utilization/1120
> Unidirectional Utilized Bandwidth/ and in Section 2.8: s/| Unidirectional
> Bandwidth Utilization  |   39     |     33         |/| Unidirectional Utilized
> Bandwidth  |   39     |     33         |/
> 
> Not all figures are numbered. Either have numbering for all or for none. Since
> you never reference them, maybe you don't need numbering. But if you
> keep it
> then:
>    where:
>                                  Figure X
>    Type: xxxx
> 
> should become:
>                                  Figure X
>    where:
>    Type: xxxx
>