[Idr] Shepherd's review of draft-lin-idr-bgpls-te-policy-pm-03
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Changwang, Mengxiao and Hao: I look forward to your presentation on September 9th. If you complete these changes by Friday September 5, 2024, I'll start WG adoption call. Cheerily, Sue Hares ============== Shepherd Review for: draft-lin-idr-bgpls-te-policy-pm-03 Status: Individual draft Intended for: Proposed Standard, version: revision needed (-4) implementations: unknown Authors: 3 Shepherd Detailed review Summary: Close to ready for WG Adoption, just 3 additions 1. Please replace RFC7752 references with [RFC9552] references 2. Please upgrade your security section You can reference the security write-ups in [RFC9552], [draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-te-path] and [draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-policy.] You must add comments about what additional critical data that this draft allows the controllers to query. You are examining: 1) round-trip delay 2) Min/Max round trip delay 3) round-trip delay variation 4) Round-Trip Loss You need to indicate this is a potential security hole. 3. Add a manageability section Provide a few words on how this information can be wisely used by the operator. Cheerily, Sue