[Idr] Shepherd report for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-sr-policy-nrp-00

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Jie, Ran Chen, Detao, Liyan, Yongqing, and Ran Pang:

This shepherd report is part of the IDR Chairs efforts to do shepherd reports on all IDR WG Document related to BGP-LS.

Cheerily, Sue Hares

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Shepherd report for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-sr-policy-nrp-00


Status: WG draft, recently adopted (8/12/2024 upload)
Prior to WG LC: needs 2 implementations.
Shepherd Summary: Editorial changes needed


Editorial changes:
1. Section 2, NRP-ID

old text: /NRP ID is planned by network operator/
new text: /NRP ID is allocated and administered by network operator./

2. Section 3, Scalability, last sentence, need clarity on what "this" refers to

old text: On the other hand this will only cause an increase
          in the status reporting information of the head node,
             the impacts to the BGP control plane are considered acceptable./

Suggested
new text:/ On the other hand, the increase in state when NRP increases will
           cause an increase in the state reported on the head node.
           Due to this fact, the impact to the BGP control plan is considered
           acceptable./