Re: [Idr] AD Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid-12

Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com> Wed, 24 February 2021 15:33 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Idr] AD Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid-12
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Juan:

Hi!

That part looks ok to me.

Thanks!

Alvaro.

On February 24, 2021 at 7:52:47 AM, Juan Alcaide (jalcaide) (
jalcaide@cisco.com) wrote:

We assumed it was understood, but it's always better to have a new set of
eyes 😉



We did some rewording below. Tried to simplify the abstract and expand some
explanation in introduction (simpler than in Motivation section)



Let us know if there is need for more rewording.