[Idr] John Scudder's Yes on draft-ietf-idr-eag-distribution-16: (with COMMENT)

John Scudder via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Fri, 07 May 2021 01:48 UTC

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Subject: [Idr] John Scudder's Yes on draft-ietf-idr-eag-distribution-16: (with COMMENT)
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John Scudder has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-idr-eag-distribution-16: Yes

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Thanks for the clear and short document! Below are a couple minor editorial comments.

1. Abstract

   Administrative groups are link attributes advertised used for traffic

Advertised, or used, pick one. (Probably keep used and delete advertised.)

2. Section 2

   This document defines an extension that enable BGP-LS speakers to

s/enable/enables/