[Idr] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-te-pm-bgp-17: (with COMMENT)

Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Wed, 19 December 2018 23:42 UTC

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Subject: [Idr] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-te-pm-bgp-17: (with COMMENT)
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draft-ietf-idr-te-pm-bgp-17: No Objection

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Hi, thanks for the work on this. I just have a couple of editorial comments:

- abstract: Please expand BGP-LS on first mention here and in the introduction.
While BGP is listed as a well-known abbreviation in the registry, BGP-LS is not.

§1: Please expand BGP-LS and NLRI on first mention.