Re: [Idr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-idr-rfc7752bis-06.txt

[Gyan Mishra <[e-mail]>]

Hi Ketan

Thank you for updating the draft and I do like the more appropriate name
change from

“ North-Bound Distribution of Link-State and Traffic Engineering (TE)

                         Information Using BGP”


*To*


*Distribution of Link-State and Traffic Engineering Information Using BGP*



Few comments.

In RFC 7752 where does in mention BGP-LS AFI/SAFI?

I think it should be added if missing.

Also since the same

71 BGP-LS [RFC7752 <https://www.iana.org/go/rfc7752>]
72 BGP-LS-VPN

Also the SR BGP-LS extension uses the same AFI/SAFI above maybe mentioning
normative reference to the SR BGP-LS extension.

I think we should add the AFI/SAFI reference to the draft below.

https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-segment-routing-ext-16

Also in the abstract mentions Traffic Engineering referring to RSVP TE and
then in the introduction mentions TEDs.  As referring to TE could mean
RSVP-TE or SR maybe in the abstract state RSVP-TE as this specification is
strictly for RSVP-TE.

Kind Regards


Gyan

On Mon, May 3, 2021 at 1:38 AM Ketan Talaulikar (ketant) <ketant=
[e-mail]> wrote:

> Hi All,
>
> This is mostly a refresh that also includes fixes for editorial nits in
> addition to the following changes related to the IANA considerations:
>
> 1) Includes updated text from draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-registry for the DE
> Guidance
> 2) Changes the policy from Specifications Required to RFC Required for
> some of the flags registries that were missed by RFC7752
> 3) Removes the column for "ISIS TLV/Sub-TLV" from the IANA registry table
> for BGP-LS TLVs/Sub-TLVs since only a subset of them have equivalent ISIS
> encodings
>
> Thanks,
> Ketan
>
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Inter-Domain Routing WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : Distribution of Link-State and Traffic
> Engineering Information Using BGP
>         Author          : Ketan Talaulikar
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-idr-rfc7752bis-06.txt
>         Pages           : 63
>         Date            : 2021-05-02
>
> Abstract:
>    In a number of environments, a component external to a network is
>    called upon to perform computations based on the network topology and
>    the current state of the connections within the network, including
>    Traffic Engineering (TE) information.  This is information typically
>    distributed by IGP routing protocols within the network.
>
>    This document describes a mechanism by which link-state and TE
>    information can be collected from networks and shared with external
>    components using the BGP routing protocol.  This is achieved using a
>    new BGP Network Layer Reachability Information (NLRI) encoding
>    format.  The mechanism is applicable to physical and virtual IGP
>    links.  The mechanism described is subject to policy control.
>
>    Applications of this technique include Application-Layer Traffic
>    Optimization (ALTO) servers and Path Computation Elements (PCEs).
>
>    This document obsoletes RFC 7752 by completely replacing that
>    document.  It makes some small changes and clarifications to the
>    previous specification.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-idr-rfc7752bis/
>
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>
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