[Idr] Shepherd report for draft-ietfidr-sr-policy-seglist-id-02

Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com> Sun, 01 September 2024 16:30 UTC

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Changwang, Weiqiang, Yao, Ketan, Mengxiao:

Thank you for your work draft-ietf-idr-sr-policy-seglist-id-02.txt
Below you will find a shepherd report for this version of the draft.

Just a warning, we will be discussing the preliminary allocations during
IDR interim on September 9th, 2024.

It appears that we have Segment lists (L, M, N, O) clashing with the
Path Segment, Reserve Path segment, Metric, and Segment List Identifier.
I think I should reassign Path Segment, Reserve Path segment, Metric,
and Segment List Identifier to a different TLV range (30+).

Let me know what you think about this change.
As part of the status for the September 9th, 2024 meeting,
Please let me know:


  1.  Are you planning any technical changes to this draft?
  2.  Do you have implementations?
  3.  Are you ready for WG LC?

Cheerily, Sue Hares

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Shepherd report for draft-ietf-idr-sr-policy-seglist-id-02
Shepherd report for draft-ietf-idr-sr-policy-seglist-id-02

Status: WG draft
implementations: unknown
allocation status: preliminary (upcoming issue)
WG LC status: unknown

Detail shepherd report

Comment: Thank you for a carefully written document.

1. Section 2.0, last paragraph, Please provide a reference in [draft-ietf-pce-multipath]

old text:/
   When signaling SR Policy by PCEP [I-D.ietf-pce-multipath], a segment
   list is identified by "Path ID", which is a 4-octet identifier. In
   this document, the segment list identifier is also represented using
   a 4-octet ID./

 new text:/
    When signaling SR Policy by PCEP [I-D.ietf-pce-multipath] (see section 5.2),
     a segment list is identified by "Path ID", which is a 4-octet identifier. In
    this document, the segment list identifier is also represented using
    a 4-octet ID./

Issue-2: Security Section, Please enhance the security section

Security section should refer to security section in
[draft-ietf-idr-sr-policy-safi]. It is important to reference:

a) operates in trusted environment (as draft-ietf-idr-sr-policy-safi)
b) Operators must a Segment ID for a segment is critical piece of
information about critical infrastructure.  Care must be take
with distribution of information.