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Re: [Idr] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-08

Dan Romascanu <dromasca@gmail.com> Thu, 24 June 2021 10:54 UTC

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From: Dan Romascanu <dromasca@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 24 Jun 2021 13:54:38 +0300
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Subject: Re: [Idr] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-08
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In the second paragraph, I meant Section 10.

Sorry for skipping that.

Regards

Dan


On Thu, Jun 24, 2021 at 11:16 AM Dan Romascanu via Datatracker <
noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

> Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
> Review result: Ready
>
> Ready with one editorial comment.
>
> The document is well written, but it requires good familiarity with BGP-LS
> and
> also reading 4 companion documents which are all work-in-progress. My
> principal
> editorial comment would be that an abbreviations section (with references
> to
> the sources of the terms) would greatly improve readability and make the
> life
> easier for future users of the document.
>
> I appreciate Section of the document which describes the operations and
> manageability aspects following the recommendations of RFC 5706. This is
> the
> section in the document that must be read by operators. Note that it looks
> short but is actually quite rich in information and refers to a few other
> documents.
>
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