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Meral:

Thank you for your review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-sr-policy-14.

Cheerily, Sue Hares
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Document: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-sr-policy-14

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour

Review Date: 2025-02-21

IETF LC End Date: 2025-02-27

IESG Telechat date: 2025-03-06



Summary:This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC, no othe=
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