Re: [Idr] AD Review of draft-ietf-idr-rfc8203bis-06
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From: "Jakob Heitz (jheitz)" <jheitz@cisco.com>
To: Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com>, 'Alvaro Retana' <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>, "draft-ietf-idr-rfc8203bis@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-idr-rfc8203bis@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Idr] AD Review of draft-ietf-idr-rfc8203bis-06
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Sue, Did you have any luck with the Cyrillic? The draft says: (See PDF for non-ASCII character string), but when I click the PDF link, it is exactly the same. Sasha, are you able to create a PDF with the Cyrillic correctly rendered and upload it? Alvaro, if we can make it work in the PDF, is it good enough? If we can't fix this, could we delete the example? I think the problem is clear enough even without the example. Regards, Jakob. -----Original Message----- From: Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com> Sent: Monday, June 29, 2020 7:53 AM To: 'Alvaro Retana' <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>; draft-ietf-idr-rfc8203bis@ietf.org Cc: idr-chairs@ietf.org; 'idr@ietf. org' <idr@ietf.org> Subject: RE: AD Review of draft-ietf-idr-rfc8203bis-06 Alvaro: Thank you for your AD report. A bit thank you for catching the major issue - that RFC8203 is being declared obsolete. (blush). I'm sorry I missed that one. I'll work to try to fix the Cyrillic script. Cheerily, Susan Hares -----Original Message----- From: Alvaro Retana [mailto:aretana.ietf@gmail.com] Sent: Monday, June 29, 2020 10:48 AM To: draft-ietf-idr-rfc8203bis@ietf.org Cc: Susan Hares; idr-chairs@ietf.org; idr@ietf. org Subject: AD Review of draft-ietf-idr-rfc8203bis-06 Dear authors: Thank you for this document! I only have a couple of comments (see below). I think these should be easy to address -- I'm starting the IETF Last Call. Thanks! Alvaro. [Line numbers from idnits.] ... 80 1. Introduction 82 It can be troublesome for an operator to correlate a BGP-4 [RFC4271] 83 session teardown in the network with a notice that was transmitted 84 via offline methods such email or telephone calls. This document 85 updates [RFC4486] by specifying a mechanism to transmit a short 86 freeform UTF-8 [RFC3629] message as part of a Cease NOTIFICATION 87 message [RFC4271] to inform the peer why the BGP session is being 88 shutdown or reset. This document obsoletes [RFC8203]; the specific 89 differences and rationale are discussed in detail in Appendix B. [nit] s/such email/such as email 91 2. Shutdown Communication ... 102 0 1 2 3 103 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 104 +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ 105 | Error code 6 | Subcode | Length | ... \ 106 +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ / 107 \ \ 108 / ... Shutdown Communication ... / 109 \ \ 110 +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ [nit] s/Error code/Error Code Capitalized in rfc486... ... 168 5. IANA Considerations 170 Per this document, IANA is requested to reference this document at 171 subcode "Administrative Shutdown", and at subcode "Administrative 172 Reset" in the "BGP Cease NOTIFICATION message subcodes" registry 173 under the "Border Gateway Protocol (BGP) Parameters" group in 174 addition to [RFC4486] and [RFC8203]. [nit] s/Per this document, / [major] s/ and [RFC8203]./. rfc8203 is being declared obsolete. ... 207 7.1. Normative References ... 231 [RFC8203] Snijders, J., Heitz, J., and J. Scudder, "BGP 232 Administrative Shutdown Communication", RFC 8203, 233 DOI 10.17487/RFC8203, July 2017, 234 <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc8203>. [minor] This reference should be Informative. ... 271 Appendix B. Changes to RFC 8203 ... 275 Feedback from operators based in regions which predominantly use 276 multibyte character sets, showed that messages similar in meaning to 277 what can be send in other languages in using single-byte encoding, 278 failed to fit within the Length constraints as specified by 279 [RFC8203]. For example, the phrase: 'Planned work to add switch to 280 stack. Completion time - 30 minutes' has length 65 bytes. Its 281 translation in Russian 282 'Плановые 283 работы по д
 284 86;бавлению к&# 285 1086;ммутатора& 286 #1074; 287 стек.Время 
 288 79;авершения - 289 30минут' (See PDF for non-ASCII 290 character string) has length 139 bytes. [major] I looked at all the other versions and none of them rendered Cyrillic script. I have no idea how to fix that, maybe ask the rfc-editor. I also don't know if there's something special about the new v3 format that would make this easier... I'll rely on the authors/Shepherd to solve this before approval.
- [Idr] AD Review of draft-ietf-idr-rfc8203bis-06 Alvaro Retana
- Re: [Idr] AD Review of draft-ietf-idr-rfc8203bis-… Susan Hares
- Re: [Idr] AD Review of draft-ietf-idr-rfc8203bis-… Jakob Heitz (jheitz)
- Re: [Idr] AD Review of draft-ietf-idr-rfc8203bis-… Susan Hares
- Re: [Idr] AD Review of draft-ietf-idr-rfc8203bis-… Alvaro Retana
- Re: [Idr] AD Review of draft-ietf-idr-rfc8203bis-… Susan Hares
- Re: [Idr] AD Review of draft-ietf-idr-rfc8203bis-… Alvaro Retana