IETF Logo Mail Archive

[Idr] Re: AD review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-33

Kaliraj Vairavakkalai <kaliraj@juniper.net> Fri, 24 January 2025 07:51 UTC

Return-Path: <kaliraj@juniper.net>
X-Original-To: idr@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: idr@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0F97EC16941F; Thu, 23 Jan 2025 23:51:51 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -2.949
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.949 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIMWL_WL_HIGH=-0.148, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_EF=-0.1, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_LOW=-0.7, RCVD_IN_VALIDITY_RPBL_BLOCKED=0.001, RCVD_IN_VALIDITY_SAFE_BLOCKED=0.001, RCVD_IN_ZEN_BLOCKED_OPENDNS=0.001, SPF_HELO_NONE=0.001, SPF_NONE=0.001, T_SCC_BODY_TEXT_LINE=-0.01, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001, URIBL_DBL_BLOCKED_OPENDNS=0.001, URIBL_ZEN_BLOCKED_OPENDNS=0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no
Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=juniper.net header.b="NJPzP27K"; dkim=neutral reason="invalid (public key: not available)" header.d=juniper.net header.b="PaDD/6+j"
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([50.223.129.194]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id deWe_8JjgSfi; Thu, 23 Jan 2025 23:51:47 -0800 (PST)
Received: from mx0b-00273201.pphosted.com (mx0b-00273201.pphosted.com [67.231.152.164]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id E62EEC14F71D; Thu, 23 Jan 2025 23:51:41 -0800 (PST)
Received: from pps.filterd (m0108161.ppops.net [127.0.0.1]) by mx0b-00273201.pphosted.com (8.18.1.2/8.18.1.2) with ESMTP id 50NMNaDA003404; Thu, 23 Jan 2025 23:51:41 -0800
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=juniper.net; h= cc:content-type:date:from:in-reply-to:message-id:mime-version :references:subject:to; s=PPS1017; bh=Ny0YHbegh2PvhF16UhCn4JJcgg ouDGZZoql6ghob4xQ=; b=NJPzP27KyE09DYz1FYWfXIxBRlfG0dHty+xrhj3d7m aRj+bGWqIESbPMHyWA8CJz6dySRKCW0vO2dNpHEwmMCmA5VNjvVgZhC63GCuAwpp 7mKNohdMK6eGzYPLbJmbncfaLI4K2h+zZiN7K4u7OeAsJuq69IKGpyQZhhmhgOuw dfEvMaUmv/2SKVranO5QYBMg99SYx+Bt5+zB/FIn7KAb4u+uXLASpI2gOmTPSRhm U5sRLFKDA7zsVPVcmXk1WKgjsFX6eWijC5c56aFQp7GmIkck7F73cGnDlK10j8/c tUelFV5t+04l+SFwujDd4u0A3a5xwDD/PGXQoWmNi6EA==
Received: from co1pr03cu002.outbound.protection.outlook.com (mail-westus2azlp17010003.outbound.protection.outlook.com [40.93.10.3]) by mx0b-00273201.pphosted.com (PPS) with ESMTPS id 44bdbmu5w1-1 (version=TLSv1.2 cipher=ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 bits=256 verify=NOT); Thu, 23 Jan 2025 23:51:40 -0800 (PST)
ARC-Seal: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; s=arcselector10001; d=microsoft.com; cv=none; b=cXcK3nfpG0G7OkRST6ut0W6lBZwGCCFGZYGdPf6me6b2eF6PI3EuPy31f1DyzT8/FjS55wxRoTIVFXCN7+C8erd8mw2wUyKIhciRlG5TIkBieHu2E6JJsmhuF1TE3k5QCjsJCAVwBO7McKB0SpXWhvOgpgDlbFoYKChaOib1RUdCx32SJl7SKpQpMUVzf8GRD2x6xh0S3HLKGN9r7cfD7JyuT14boeovvLY82yEx0+qGfs7oHj975gN24LZEQzMyYflacXgaPU6PqWX/wc8iPrW0vsntOTRG54YmL70oJJPM9S4NB00Zq/RizLSvrOiIrh/IdGy+8RhPmky+/DwHCw==
ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=microsoft.com; s=arcselector10001; h=From:Date:Subject:Message-ID:Content-Type:MIME-Version:X-MS-Exchange-AntiSpam-MessageData-ChunkCount:X-MS-Exchange-AntiSpam-MessageData-0:X-MS-Exchange-AntiSpam-MessageData-1; bh=Ny0YHbegh2PvhF16UhCn4JJcggouDGZZoql6ghob4xQ=; b=HuVvF2a5KyEIRw52QTkv+x/KT/qb/NdujDGl2HNiWZSkepCMcUYJQjxJ/k3/sm1fDq7ViXZ65cyoQ+I4+IwNyxIx5Co6L7RO/cQp69ISV13Mb1jWdOcILiw6VINOLYLjfm9FZLE+CGSnZJgXJrEQHTTxZQ32Bi2CdceW474jZ/89eBJkocB11W7gnC1VcMN9tZ0lEcW+ssjD9ldODDtzHVwaeBC3py2vr4wrsZuNoP4hU4zICFNWNAAQwhrkKsLUsiQ5QReflHGh0wCJ7qBpDEYn6G6utfdw1Eu6LN4wDCBon/9+4xGgnBCN1V65tDQlLZmqgh3ZJFCnz6EiP2HtVQ==
ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; mx.microsoft.com 1; spf=pass smtp.mailfrom=juniper.net; dmarc=pass action=none header.from=juniper.net; dkim=pass header.d=juniper.net; arc=none
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=juniper.net; s=selector1; h=From:Date:Subject:Message-ID:Content-Type:MIME-Version:X-MS-Exchange-SenderADCheck; bh=Ny0YHbegh2PvhF16UhCn4JJcggouDGZZoql6ghob4xQ=; b=PaDD/6+jnyVmGZu2eoOQT9/IMoO5mnc8EiDtomCXjg0WFNqKRnkgHJTwfgik1bUERQlfjQcQBqRUjRbVlO9SrMqEKBS7zpdaHzKRuM2NGCR5xWkycrCsoumV+rLrr9Vwr9TrcxAuXRzePRVJowviPWunPOu9HTNXp9HiVUTHXic=
Received: from SJ0PR05MB8632.namprd05.prod.outlook.com (2603:10b6:a03:394::12) by BY3PR05MB7873.namprd05.prod.outlook.com (2603:10b6:a03:36f::17) with Microsoft SMTP Server (version=TLS1_2, cipher=TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384) id 15.20.8377.19; Fri, 24 Jan 2025 07:51:38 +0000
Received: from SJ0PR05MB8632.namprd05.prod.outlook.com ([fe80::bf6:4963:e05b:386e]) by SJ0PR05MB8632.namprd05.prod.outlook.com ([fe80::bf6:4963:e05b:386e%6]) with mapi id 15.20.8356.014; Fri, 24 Jan 2025 07:51:38 +0000
From: Kaliraj Vairavakkalai <kaliraj@juniper.net>
To: John Scudder <jgs@juniper.net>, "draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: [Idr] AD review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-33
Thread-Index: AQHbaQHwg89Cbogf40ebXZV28nSTHbMghTCAgAURjFE=
Date: Fri, 24 Jan 2025 07:51:38 +0000
Message-ID: <SJ0PR05MB8632BDFDDD9C5618C82B57CCA2E32@SJ0PR05MB8632.namprd05.prod.outlook.com>
References: <D2DBFEB1-2A49-4990-8BB4-C773F5EC195C@juniper.net> <1FC168EF-B33D-4B76-B421-BC07D05AE693@juniper.net>
In-Reply-To: <1FC168EF-B33D-4B76-B421-BC07D05AE693@juniper.net>
Accept-Language: en-US
Content-Language: en-US
X-MS-Has-Attach:
X-MS-TNEF-Correlator:
msip_labels: MSIP_Label_0633b888-ae0d-4341-a75f-06e04137d755_Enabled=True;MSIP_Label_0633b888-ae0d-4341-a75f-06e04137d755_SiteId=bea78b3c-4cdb-4130-854a-1d193232e5f4;MSIP_Label_0633b888-ae0d-4341-a75f-06e04137d755_SetDate=2025-01-24T07:48:36.5998767Z;MSIP_Label_0633b888-ae0d-4341-a75f-06e04137d755_Name=0633b888-ae0d-4341-a75f-06e04137d755;MSIP_Label_0633b888-ae0d-4341-a75f-06e04137d755_ContentBits=0;MSIP_Label_0633b888-ae0d-4341-a75f-06e04137d755_Method=Standard
x-ms-reactions: allow
x-ms-publictraffictype: Email
x-ms-traffictypediagnostic: SJ0PR05MB8632:EE_|BY3PR05MB7873:EE_
x-ms-office365-filtering-correlation-id: d90c77d8-ade6-4e50-ad47-08dd3c4beed4
x-ms-exchange-senderadcheck: 1
x-ms-exchange-antispam-relay: 0
x-microsoft-antispam: BCL:0;ARA:13230040|1800799024|366016|376014|8096899003|13003099007|7053199007|38070700018;
x-microsoft-antispam-message-info: /cYMOgkicILZTj81QtujNW9zYN/VSgLOsUPivK6tIFiheNPSIDv6G7zhO9t9jI7ftgBzJjSvRs325vDNTA7FC6Be3fsw7xEHd5/nlIklvXRII459FdI4mmtMw2qcZnK2+TcwznY2LiZkUbn1jMNk6s2Pb6d2mDorKAhQYOG1lijlKYEdCMvt8Tjla4SypRNUfYOVfu10Ga5wtyfs/jT0QCxDPs9DXLMwHxNoh70i2rcRcoUN4dWmGH2NlouDJYQKmfc++1MZNJRphNFzwiYHcJ4fU2gS22RLobiODK/LQxuLes0Yri7KNo7e6kBGg/gTv1YD/rHcUTBexudUbR2ZehOmAAbdnv8FnsfnZnOHJY0wL+9LjuoVvplhuwlvE3E9ED/rki4H/e8r96gldO+IcJ7ab3nvrw1PttPHpKxwf49SXIsxZPGby5wno7nRLDEHwIaufBfneTANe/EmGvvXD0eUHWVTQ9wsUeRZRzLrUo8b9zm1gWxPAml/0S1T9dsDW0q1c0kbhOqZ8awYgyh2AAy6GZ8oYrVC0uP4xdvhuVHR6YWYzgRHsm1FnvDEmrJXNZSsFMQX1AtGDQTV7Elqh8UipC5qRNxnWWjZXLxZA2aufywGh2GOuXH7f2mgJYrzeH2XAf2deHBC+nNUCIHby/xxAwEzYswabxl+xhS/1k8Pj9WXdxDdCenVe0mdYe6OpIni4RNftjqLdwnQbjGzFqeXRlSgxMUmfaL5o9QC2W+LjzZU4oBtVpB+O/bz4p/pP7zfrvist1eFFvqY4d0U8nb3O+anJiCLHpxNg9b65hAiiJjakHuNoJ+0gfTsqMjR+nsUf2lw5U11fGbPJ9KW0L2VMrpQUH2xbmVMJJ9u6qXnDoCzgsRUjDeLPWzlKWrXo+/zTEyN1vvKWiCutg82JoPN/0yxvK71sDCiDxi1K3TDITW7GghvPo1lmi7oDBj06Kdlp7B0P6ilZMVX0wHVBZuZMO8xcoF1VQbdRE5mMdRVfBnYkOOoKeXbtQu0LE/msSKfdUypvjh9tO21Y+b/tedd4Nf7uUXanilECRzGxcbZmdwwxKRwrS7fmqdF/fJjRAqwUQKRiJGXTZPuFyH7sXHrjslonNINwDoI6vk9jQSY7jIXBKYmgRV5ShAxCde6H+VxoBKsCqTLpnXPZWOpw4zenKHr0EXbJ3mYFsoCfmrGWppN1MtgolLD1EqmEV+v7AaXGRHw5PNp5y37gF+gVoHOfaDtlphkndF14X67uoFiNT4QrVUn0wafdwyi2ZpTAuIMf5mlGIn1MIxUOhWuZctCs+3JTHJvchDVqXY0N2PHope4mauqTiLHH9ClEJxipUptVnP9dAOOPQuFbDygR7wKZQQGZ3eDhkW2tbZ8tsWo16C5QiaDhFvuBGuumSEFHbfyySTbGwBRCQ3jGtGpJKkjpmUP10xpELQDJ03K5YoXbekwMJ92Hr+yp83abuJt
x-forefront-antispam-report: CIP:255.255.255.255;CTRY:;LANG:en;SCL:1;SRV:;IPV:NLI;SFV:NSPM;H:SJ0PR05MB8632.namprd05.prod.outlook.com;PTR:;CAT:NONE;SFS:(13230040)(1800799024)(366016)(376014)(8096899003)(13003099007)(7053199007)(38070700018);DIR:OUT;SFP:1102;
x-ms-exchange-antispam-messagedata-chunkcount: 1
x-ms-exchange-antispam-messagedata-0: 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
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="_000_SJ0PR05MB8632BDFDDD9C5618C82B57CCA2E32SJ0PR05MB8632namp_"
MIME-Version: 1.0
X-OriginatorOrg: juniper.net
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-AuthAs: Internal
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-AuthSource: SJ0PR05MB8632.namprd05.prod.outlook.com
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-Network-Message-Id: d90c77d8-ade6-4e50-ad47-08dd3c4beed4
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-originalarrivaltime: 24 Jan 2025 07:51:38.3325 (UTC)
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-fromentityheader: Hosted
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-id: bea78b3c-4cdb-4130-854a-1d193232e5f4
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-mailboxtype: HOSTED
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-userprincipalname: eFHrjUwov0hnMjJ+9CSqfRgoQzDklYaM1D8oiGBh0RxBC+3UVYZ0YwE5ByRtSsDlpKwtKYESOLfsAoG3eLrjuA==
X-MS-Exchange-Transport-CrossTenantHeadersStamped: BY3PR05MB7873
X-Proofpoint-GUID: xqx70mcoZ5J7ImmagAjMM7C4wk4USypP
X-Proofpoint-ORIG-GUID: xqx70mcoZ5J7ImmagAjMM7C4wk4USypP
X-Proofpoint-Virus-Version: vendor=baseguard engine=ICAP:2.0.293,Aquarius:18.0.1057,Hydra:6.0.680,FMLib:17.12.68.34 definitions=2025-01-24_03,2025-01-23_01,2024-11-22_01
X-Proofpoint-Spam-Details: rule=outbound_spam_notspam policy=outbound_spam score=0 phishscore=0 clxscore=1015 priorityscore=1501 impostorscore=0 spamscore=0 malwarescore=0 suspectscore=0 lowpriorityscore=0 mlxlogscore=999 adultscore=0 mlxscore=0 bulkscore=0 classifier=spam adjust=0 reason=mlx scancount=1 engine=8.19.0-2411120000 definitions=main-2501240055
Message-ID-Hash: YM3AAFJBYWO5BH5RREWEA3YUFYYDTNWW
X-Message-ID-Hash: YM3AAFJBYWO5BH5RREWEA3YUFYYDTNWW
X-MailFrom: kaliraj@juniper.net
X-Mailman-Rule-Misses: dmarc-mitigation; no-senders; approved; emergency; loop; banned-address; member-moderation; header-match-idr.ietf.org-0; nonmember-moderation; administrivia; implicit-dest; max-recipients; max-size; news-moderation; no-subject; digests; suspicious-header
CC: "idr@ietf.org" <idr@ietf.org>
X-Mailman-Version: 3.3.9rc6
Precedence: list
Subject: [Idr] Re: AD review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-33
List-Id: Inter-Domain Routing <idr.ietf.org>
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/JvPHIfurEl0b_JsSVsL56xnmGP4>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/idr>
List-Help: <mailto:idr-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Owner: <mailto:idr-owner@ietf.org>
List-Post: <mailto:idr@ietf.org>
List-Subscribe: <mailto:idr-join@ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <mailto:idr-leave@ietf.org>

Hi John, thanks for the offline discussion on some of these comments.

I have uploaded your review comments file to github, opened an issue. And recorded my responses to them in the same issue.

Here is the link to the issue: https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct/issues/73

Link to latest version of draft with updates to incorporate comments:
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-34.html

Thanks
Kaliraj


Juniper Business Use Only
From: John Scudder <jgs@juniper.net>
Date: Monday, January 20, 2025 at 6:24 PM
To: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct@ietf.org <draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct@ietf.org>
Cc: idr@ietf.org <idr@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [Idr] AD review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ct-33
Hi Authors and all,

During my review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-car-10 I noticed something that also applies to your review:

BTW I noticed that the final paragraph of your Security Considerations is
almost verbatim identical to the final paragraph of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-car-10.
I have no idea who cribbed from whom, or if the paragraph came from a third
party, but take this as a suggestion to consider acknowledging sources of
things like that, if not already covered in your acks. (I've also made this
suggestion to the authors of bgp-car.)

Thanks,

—John

P.S.: Also I noticed a nit, s/Harpern/Halpern/

v2.29.0 | Report a Bug | By Email | System Status