Re: [Idr] AD Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid-12

"David Smith (djsmith)" <djsmith@cisco.com> Tue, 09 March 2021 14:39 UTC

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From: "David Smith (djsmith)" <djsmith@cisco.com>
To: Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>, Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com>, "draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid@ietf.org>, "Juan Alcaide (jalcaide)" <jalcaide@cisco.com>
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Subject: Re: [Idr] AD Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid-12
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Hi,

We believe we’ve addressed all of Alvaro’s comments. If any other feedback, please let us know. Otherwise, we’ll post v13 on Monday 4/15.

Thanks,

/dave


From: Idr <idr-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Wednesday, February 24, 2021 at 10:35 AM
To: "shares@ndzh.com" <shares@ndzh.com>om>, "draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid@ietf.org>rg>, "Juan Alcaide (jalcaide)" <jalcaide@cisco.com>
Cc: "idr-chairs@ietf.org" <idr-chairs@ietf.org>rg>, "idr@ietf. List" <idr@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [Idr] AD Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid-12

Juan:

Hi!

That part looks ok to me.

Thanks!

Alvaro.


On February 24, 2021 at 7:52:47 AM, Juan Alcaide (jalcaide) (jalcaide@cisco.com<mailto:jalcaide@cisco.com>) wrote:

We assumed it was understood, but it's always better to have a new set of eyes 😉



We did some rewording below. Tried to simplify the abstract and expand some explanation in introduction (simpler than in Motivation section)



Let us know if there is need for more rewording.