[Idr] Re: Shepherd Report for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-link-mtu-07
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Hi, Sue,
Sorry for delay reply. Thanks for your careful work. We'll update our draft per your suggestions ASAP. Please see our replies inline. Thanks.
B.R.
Zhu Yongqing
China Telecom
zhuyq-ietf2024@foxmail.com
From: Susan Hares
Date: 2024-08-31 00:05
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Subject: [Idr] Shepherd Report for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-link-mtu-07
Shepherd report for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-link-mtu-07
Status: WG Document
Implementations: Unknown, need 2 for WG LC
[Yongqing]We need to check about the implementations and will get back to you when we get further information.
draft status: Needs
Summary of Review: Needs -08 prior to WG LC
Status: Needs to resolve 4 technical issues and 1 editorial.
Technical issues:
1. Please replace [RFC7752] with [RFC9552]
[Yongqing] Thanks. We'll upadate this in the new version.
2. Introduction, paragraph 5, fix reference to [RFC9085]
Old text:/
[I-D.ietf-idr-bgp-ls-segment-routing-ext] defines SR extensions to
BGP-LS and specifies the TLVs and sub-TLVs for advertising SR
information. /
New text:/
[RFC9085] defines SR extensions to
BGP-LS and specifies the TLVs and sub-TLVs for advertising SR
information.
[Yongqing]Thanks. We'll upadate this in the new version.
3. Security Section.
Link MTU provides proprietary information regarding a network.
See security section in draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-sr-policy-05
for consideration.
Please consider adding many of the points from this section include:
1) security consideration for [RFC9552], Trusted environment of
BGP-LS [RFC8402], and confidentiality of MTU data.
[Yongqing] Thanks. We'll add some points in the new version.
4. Fix the references
Editorial changes:
Change-1 Abstract, paragraph 2, remove
The abstract needs to be 2 paragraphs. Please just remove paragraph 2.
[Yongqing] Thanks. We'll update this in the new version.
- [Idr] Shepherd Report for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-l… Susan Hares
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