[Idr] Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-deprecate-as-set-confed-set-17

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From: Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com>
To: Ines Robles <mariainesrobles@googlemail.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Ines:

Thank you for your careful review of draft-ietf-idr-deprecate-as-set.

The authors will respond to your specific points.

Cheerily, Sue Hares
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Document: draft-ietf-idr-deprecate-as-set-confed-set-17

Reviewer: Ines Robles

Review Date: 2025-02-17

IETF LC End Date: 2025-02-17

IESG Telechat date: 2025-03-06



Summary:



The draft prohibits the use of the AS_SET and AS_CONFED_SET path segment types

in the AS_PATH. It distinguishes between two aggregation methods:



• Traditional brief aggregation (as defined in RFC 4271) aggregates routes by

combining differences in the AS_PATH into an unordered AS_SET (or

AS_CONFED_SET). This approach can leave the route’s origin ambiguous.



• Consistent brief aggregation avoids this ambiguity by deliberately truncating

the AS_PATH at a designated origin AS. By doing so, it does not use AS_SET or

AS_CONFED_SET, resulting in an unambiguous route origin.



This document updates RFC 4271 by deprecating the origination of BGP routes

with AS_SET (Type 1 AS_PATH segment) and updates RFC 5065 by deprecating the

origination of BGP routes with AS_CONFED_SET (Type 4 AS_PATH segment). It also

obsoletes RFC 6472.



The document is well written, and I have some questions:



1- Consistent Brief Aggregation: What operational considerations or guidelines

do you suggest for selecting the designated origin AS in environments where

multiple candidate origins exist, such as in multi-homed or proxy aggregation

scenarios?



2- In cases where consistent brief aggregation results in an empty AS_PATH, is

attaching the ATOMIC_AGGREGATE attribute sufficient to handle the resulting

loss of AS_PATH information? Or should operators implement additional measures

to ensure proper route validation and loop prevention?



Thanks for this document.



Ines





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