Return-Path: X-Original-To: idr@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: idr@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id AC9841200CE for ; Thu, 12 Sep 2019 00:16:13 -0700 (PDT) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: 1.348 X-Spam-Level: * X-Spam-Status: No, score=1.348 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DOS_OUTLOOK_TO_MX=2.845, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, KHOP_HELO_FCRDNS=0.399, SPF_HELO_NONE=0.001, SPF_NONE=0.001, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001] autolearn=no autolearn_force=no Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id MvgIfwDPdYm6 for ; Thu, 12 Sep 2019 00:16:12 -0700 (PDT) Received: from hickoryhill-consulting.com (50-245-122-100-static.hfc.comcastbusiness.net [50.245.122.100]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 (128/128 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 2D09B12007A for ; Thu, 12 Sep 2019 00:16:12 -0700 (PDT) X-Default-Received-SPF: pass (skip=forwardok (res=PASS)) x-ip-name=97.112.17.31; From: "Susan Hares" To: Date: Thu, 12 Sep 2019 03:16:01 -0400 Message-ID: <015c01d56939$ef3dba30$cdb92e90$@ndzh.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="----=_NextPart_000_015D_01D56918.682E8B30" X-Mailer: Microsoft Outlook 14.0 Thread-Index: AdVpOc4tEukZlgofSe2Oexhnv5o8fA== Content-Language: en-us X-Antivirus: AVG (VPS 190911-2, 09/11/2019), Outbound message X-Antivirus-Status: Not-Tested X-Authenticated-User: skh@ndzh.com Archived-At: Subject: Re: [Idr] Shpehrd of draft-ietf-idr-rfc8203bis-04.txt - shepherd review X-BeenThere: idr@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: Inter-Domain Routing List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 12 Sep 2019 07:16:14 -0000 This is a multipart message in MIME format. ------=_NextPart_000_015D_01D56918.682E8B30 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Just in case you cannot interpret the title - this is the shepherd report. It's early and my fingers stumbled (smile). Sue From: Susan Hares [mailto:shares@ndzh.com] Sent: Thursday, September 12, 2019 3:02 AM To: idr@ietf.org Cc: 'John Scudder'; 'Job Snijders' Subject: Shpehrd of draft-ietf-idr-rfc8203bis-04.txt Job, Jacob, John, Alex: I have reviewed draft-ietf-ider-rfc8203bis-04.txt in preparation For sending this document to the IESG for publication. I've included my comments in two forms: Required Changes and Editorial suggestions. I've asked for OPS-DIR and RTG-DIR early review of this draft. Please consider submitting the required text changes in a -05.txt version so the early reviews can move swiftly. Susan Hares -------------------- Shepherd's Required Changes prior to submission: IN section: 5. IANA Considerations Old: /Cease Notification message subcodes/ New: /BGP Cease NOTIFICATION message subcodes/ Why: registry name at: https://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-parameters/bgp-parameters.xhtml#bgp-par ameters-83 is incorrectly provided in the text. Shepherd's Editorial suggestion: Location: Page 3: Section 6 Security considerations Paragraph 3, last sentence Text:/ Refer to the related considerations in [RFC4271 ] and [RFC4272 ]./ I understand why you point to [RFC4272], but what related considerations are you examining in [RFC4271]. I suggest adding a section in [RFC4271] that you wish to refer to. The form could be New text:/ Refer to the related considerations in [RFC4271 ] (section x.x) and [RFC4272 ]./ ------=_NextPart_000_015D_01D56918.682E8B30 Content-Type: text/html; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

Just in case you cannot interpret the title = – this is the shepherd report.

It’s early and my = fingers stumbled (smile).

 

Sue =

 

From:= = Susan Hares [mailto:shares@ndzh.com]
Sent: Thursday, = September 12, 2019 3:02 AM
To: idr@ietf.org
Cc: = 'John Scudder'; 'Job Snijders'
Subject: Shpehrd of = draft-ietf-idr-rfc8203bis-04.txt

 

Job, Jacob, = John,  Alex:

 

I have = reviewed draft-ietf-ider-rfc8203bis-04.txt in preparation =

For sending this document to the = IESG for publication. 

I’ve included my comments in two forms: =

Required Changes and Editorial = suggestions.

 

I’ve asked for OPS-DIR and RTG-DIR early review = of

this draft.    = Please consider submitting the required

text changes in a -05.txt version so the =

early reviews can move swiftly. =

 

Susan Hares

--------------------

 

Shepherd's Required Changes prior to submission: =

 

IN section: 5.  IANA Considerations =

 

Old:  /Cease Notification message = subcodes/

New: /BGP Cease = NOTIFICATION message subcodes/

 

Why: = registry name at:

https://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-parameters/bgp-par= ameters.xhtml#bgp-parameters-83

is = incorrectly provided in the text.

 

Shepherd’s Editorial suggestion: =

Location:  Page 3: Section = 6 Security considerations

Paragraph = 3, last sentence

 

Text:/ Refer to the
   related considerations in =

[RFC4271] and [RFC4272]./ =

 

I understand why you point to [RFC4272], but what = related

considerations are you = examining in [RFC4271].

 

I suggest = adding a section in [RFC4271] that you wish to refer to. =

The form could be

 

New text:/ Refer to the
   related considerations in =

[RFC4271] (section x.x) and [RFC4272]./ =

 

 

 

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