[Idr] AD Review of draft-ietf-idr-capabilities-registry-change-06

[Alvaro Retana <[e-mail]>]

John:

Hi!  Thanks for your work on this document!

I have a couple of important items that need to be addressed before
moving this document forward, specifically about change control and a
couple more values that should be deprecated.  Please see in-line.

I will wait for an update before starting the IETF LC.

Thanks!!

Alvaro.



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11    Abstract

13       This document updates RFC 5492 by making a change to the registration
14       procedures for BGP Capability Codes.  Specifically, the range
15       formerly designated "Reserved for Private Use" is divided into three
16       new ranges, respectively designated as "First Come First Served",
17       "Experimental" and "Reserved".

[nit] s/Experimental/Experimental Use


...
63    1.  Introduction

65       [RFC5492] designates the range of Capability Codes 128-255 as
66       "Reserved for Private Use".  Subsequent experience has shown this to
67       be not only useless, but actively confusing to implementors.  BGP
68       Capability Codes do not meet the criteria for "Private Use" described
69       in [RFC8126] section 4.1.  An example of a legitimate "private use"
70       code point might be a BGP community [RFC1997] value assigned for use
71       within a given Autonomous System, but no analogous use of
72       Capabilities exists.

[nit/potential rathole] I don’t see why Capabilities Advertisement
can’t meet the “for private or local use only” criteria in rfc8126.  I
guess we just don’t know of any local-only capability!  ;-)
Seriously, I’m not going to object the justification, or strongly ask
you to change it, but others in the IESG might.  Suggestion: Leave
just the first two sentences.


...
85    2.  Discussion
...
100       The reason for designating "IESG" as the change controller for all
101       registrations is that while it should be easy to obtain a Capability
102       Code, once registered it's not a trivial matter to safely and
103       interoperably change the use of that code, and thus working group
104       consensus should be sought before changes are made to existing
105       registrations.

[minor] I don’t think this paragraph is needed because “For registries
created by RFCs in the IETF stream, change control for the registry
lies by default with the IETF, via the IESG.” [rfc8126]

[] I think it is confusing (at least to me) the text about “working
group consensus” if the change controller is the IESG, and we're
dealing with FCFS.  Again, I don’t think this paragraph is needed.


107       Finally, we invite implementors who have used values in the range
108       128-255 to contribute to this draft, so that the values can be
109       included in the registry.  Values that have been reported, are
110       included.

[nit] The invitation is not needed, since the draft is now “done” and
the values are already included...


112    3.  IANA Considerations
...
119       Registry Owner/Change Controller: IESG

[] See above.

121       Registration procedures:

123                       +---------+-------------------------+
124                       |  Range  | Registration Procedures |
125                       +---------+-------------------------+
126                       |   1-63  | IETF Review             |
127                       |  64-238 | First Come First Served |
128                       | 239-254 | Experimental            |
129                       +---------+-------------------------+

[minor] Please add Figure/Table numbers.

131       Note: a separate "owner" column is not provided because the owner of
132       all registrations, once made, is "IESG".

[major] The IANA review (which I now notice was only sent to Sue and
me), says: "Since part of the registry will be First Come First
Served, we'll be adding a change controller column, per RFC 8126."
[That is the full review...]  "Change controller" and "owner" are the
same thing; I think it would be ok to rename the "Reference" column
(below) to "Reference / Change Controller".

134       IANA is requested to perform the following new allocations within the
135       "Capability Codes" registry:

137       +-------+-----------------------------------------------+-----------+
138       | Value | Description                                   | Reference |
139       +-------+-----------------------------------------------+-----------+
140       |  128  | Prestandard Route Refresh (deprecated)        | (this     |
141       |       |                                               | document) |
142       +-------+-----------------------------------------------+-----------+
143       |  129  | Prestandard Outbound Route Filtering          | (this     |
144       |       | (deprecated), prestandard draft-li-idr-       | document) |
145       |       | flowspec-rpd-04 (deprecated)                  |           |
146       +-------+-----------------------------------------------+-----------+
147       |  130  | Prestandard Outbound Route Filtering          | (this     |
148       |       | (deprecated)                                  | document) |
149       +-------+-----------------------------------------------+-----------+
150       |  255  | Reserved                                      | (this     |
151       |       |                                               | document) |
152       +-------+-----------------------------------------------+-----------+

[major] There is mention in the mail archive of other values that
should also be deprecated [1].

- "131 (CISCO multi-session)"
- "184, cumulus hostname draft"
- "185, operational draft"

[1] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/eIoTAz3wS6dJMKBoIxwrAk98lxM