[Idr] Kathleen Moriarty's Yes on draft-ietf-idr-error-handling-18: (with COMMENT)

"Kathleen Moriarty" <Kathleen.Moriarty.ietf@gmail.com> Tue, 10 March 2015 00:07 UTC

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Subject: [Idr] Kathleen Moriarty's Yes on draft-ietf-idr-error-handling-18: (with COMMENT)
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Kathleen Moriarty has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-idr-error-handling-18: Yes

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Thanks for your work on this draft.  
My only comment would be to see if you could break the first paragraph of
the security considerations into a few sentences.  Maybe getting rid of
the parens to help break out the additional sentences would help.