Re: [Idr] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-idr-rfc5575bis-21.txt

Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com> Thu, 16 April 2020 21:17 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Idr] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-idr-rfc5575bis-21.txt
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Hi!

Just a counter-nit.

In §7, the reference to rfc4360 (where the extended communities are
defined) shouldn’t have changed to rfc7153 (a reorganization of the
registries).

Perhaps s/standardizes as BGP extended community values
[RFC7153]/standardizes as BGP extended communities [RFC4360]


Thanks!

Alvaro.

On April 16, 2020 at 5:11:44 PM, Christoph Loibl (c@tix.at) wrote:

I just uploaded the -21(!) revision of the rfc5575bis draft to correct the
nits pointed out by the latest reviews.