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Re: [Idr] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-18: (with COMMENT)

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From: "Ketan Talaulikar (ketant)" <ketant@cisco.com>
To: Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Idr] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-18: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Barry,

Thanks for your review. I've accepted and updated the draft for all your editorial comments below.

A v19 of the draft has just been posted which includes these changes along with others that I had pending in my buffer from Alvaro's AD review and other IESG last call reviews.

https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-19 

Thanks,
Ketan

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Subject: Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-18: (with COMMENT)

Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-18: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Just editorial stuff...

Throughout: “i.e.” needs a comma after it.  So does “e.g.”.

— Section 1 —

   SR can be directly applied to either an MPLS dataplane (SR/MPLS) with
   no change on the forwarding plane or to a modified IPv6 forwarding

Make it “either to” so it’s parallel with the “or to” that comes later.

   centralized controller based BGP Egress Peer Engineering solution
   involving SR path computation using the BGP Peering Segments.  This
   use-case comprises of a centralized controller that learns the BGP

“Centralized-controller-based” is a compound adjective that needs to be hyphenated.  “Use case” is a noun, and should not be hyphenated.  And “comprises” should not have “of” after it (“consists of” would, though).

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