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From: "Dongjie (Jimmy)" <jie.dong@huawei.com>
To: "Ketan Talaulikar (ketant)" <ketant@cisco.com>, Susan Hares
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Hi Ketan,

Thanks for considering my suggestion.

Best regards,
Jie

From: Ketan Talaulikar (ketant) [mailto:ketant@cisco.com]
Sent: Friday, August 09, 2019 12:05 PM
To: Dongjie (Jimmy) <jie.dong@huawei.com>; Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com>; '=
idr wg' <idr@ietf.org>
Subject: RE: [Idr] Adoption call for draft-ketant-idr-rfc7752bis-01.txt [8/=
8 to 8/22]

Hi Jie,

Agree and I will put some text to this effect in the next update of the bis=
 draft.

Thanks,
Ketan

From: Dongjie (Jimmy) <jie.dong@huawei.com<mailto:jie.dong@huawei.com>>
Sent: 09 August 2019 08:54
To: Ketan Talaulikar (ketant) <ketant@cisco.com<mailto:ketant@cisco.com>>; =
Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com<mailto:shares@ndzh.com>>; 'idr wg' <idr@ietf.o=
rg<mailto:idr@ietf.org>>
Subject: RE: [Idr] Adoption call for draft-ketant-idr-rfc7752bis-01.txt [8/=
8 to 8/22]

Hi Ketan,

Thanks for your prompt feedback.

In my understanding, RFC7752 defines a general mechanism to distribute link=
-state and TE information to the consumer, IGP is just one source of that i=
nformation. Also please note that the text quoted from bgp-ls-epe draft ref=
erences RFC7752.

That said, it may be helpful to add some text in rfc7752bis to indicate tha=
t the rules about node/link descriptors are applicable to the protocol-IDs =
defined in this document, the rules for other protocol-IDs will be defined =
in documents which introduce the protocol-ID.

Best regards,
Jie

From: Ketan Talaulikar (ketant) [mailto:ketant@cisco.com]
Sent: Friday, August 09, 2019 10:57 AM
To: Dongjie (Jimmy) <jie.dong@huawei.com<mailto:jie.dong@huawei.com>>; Susa=
n Hares <shares@ndzh.com<mailto:shares@ndzh.com>>; 'idr wg' <idr@ietf.org<m=
ailto:idr@ietf.org>>
Subject: RE: [Idr] Adoption call for draft-ketant-idr-rfc7752bis-01.txt [8/=
8 to 8/22]

Hi Jie,

Thanks for your review and comments.

Let us note that RFC7752 was about pushing IGP link-state via BGP-LS and as=
 such the link descriptors that it mentions are applicable in the scenario =
where the protocol is OSPF or IS-IS. The BGP EPE draft introduced the BGP p=
rotocol and specified the link descriptors for BGP peering links use case. =
As such, RFC7752 and BGP EPE are not in conflict or contradiction with each=
 other.

This bis draft merely clarifies RFC7752 and is therefore scoped only for th=
e IGP link-state propagation via BGP-LS.

Thanks,
Ketan

From: Idr <idr-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:idr-bounces@ietf.org>> On Behalf Of =
Dongjie (Jimmy)
Sent: 09 August 2019 08:14
To: Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com<mailto:shares@ndzh.com>>; 'idr wg' <idr@ie=
tf.org<mailto:idr@ietf.org>>
Subject: Re: [Idr] Adoption call for draft-ketant-idr-rfc7752bis-01.txt [8/=
8 to 8/22]

Hi,

In general I support the adoption of this document. It helps to clarify som=
e confusions in RFC7752, and to solve some issues we realized during the pr=
ogress of subsequent BGP-LS extensions.

And here are the comments I raised on the mic during IDR session in Montrea=
l:

In section 4.2.2 of this -bis document, there are some changes to the encod=
ing rules of link local/remote identifiers in the Link descriptors.

"    If interface and neighbor addresses, either IPv4 or IPv6, are
      present, then the IP address TLVs MUST be included and the Link
      Local/Remote Identifiers TLV MUST NOT be included in the Link
      Descriptor.  The Link Local/Remote Identifiers TLV MAY be included
      in the link attribute when available.

      If interface and neighbor addresses are not present and the link
      local/remote identifiers are present, then the Link Local/Remote
      Identifiers TLV MUST be included in the Link Descriptor."

While in draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-19, section 4.2, it says:

" o  Link Descriptors MUST include the following TLV, as defined in
      [RFC7752]:

      *  Link Local/Remote Identifiers (TLV 258) contains the 4-octet
         Link Local Identifier followed by the 4-octet Link Remote
         Identifier.  The value 0 is used by default when the link
         remote identifier is unknown.

   o  Additional Link Descriptors TLVs, as defined in [RFC7752], MAY
      also be included to describe the addresses corresponding to the
      link between the BGP routers:

      *  IPv4 Interface Address (Sub-TLV 259) contains the address of
         the local interface through which the BGP session is
         established."

Thus it seems the above text in -7752bis is somewhat inconsistent with the =
bgp-ls-epe draft. Could this be considered in next revision of the bis draf=
t, or the bgp-ls-epe draft? Thanks.

Best regards,
Jie

From: Idr [mailto:idr-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Susan Hares
Sent: Friday, August 09, 2019 3:31 AM
To: 'idr wg' <idr@ietf.org<mailto:idr@ietf.org>>
Subject: [Idr] Adoption call for draft-ketant-idr-rfc7752bis-01.txt [8/8 to=
 8/22]

This begins a 2 week adoption call for draft-ketant-idr-rfc7752bis-01.txt [=
8/8 to 8/22/2019]

In your comments please indicate "support" or "no support".

The chair and AD feel that a revision to RFC7752 is needed
to specify additional error handling.  Please consider
if this draft is a good place to start for this revision.

Cheerily, Susan Hares

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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
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<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">Thanks for considering my suggestion.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">Jie<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span lang=3D"EN-US">From:</span></b><span lang=
=3D"EN-US"> Ketan Talaulikar (ketant) [mailto:ketant@cisco.com]
<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, August 09, 2019 12:05 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Dongjie (Jimmy) &lt;jie.dong@huawei.com&gt;; Susan Hares &lt;sha=
res@ndzh.com&gt;; 'idr wg' &lt;idr@ietf.org&gt;<br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: [Idr] Adoption call for draft-ketant-idr-rfc7752bis-01.=
txt [8/8 to 8/22]<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-IN" style=3D"mso-fareast-language:E=
N-US">Hi Jie,
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-IN" style=3D"mso-fareast-language:E=
N-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-IN" style=3D"mso-fareast-language:E=
N-US">Agree and I will put some text to this effect in the next update of t=
he bis draft.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-IN" style=3D"mso-fareast-language:E=
N-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-IN" style=3D"mso-fareast-language:E=
N-US">Thanks,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-IN" style=3D"mso-fareast-language:E=
N-US">Ketan<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span lang=3D"EN-US">From:</span></b><span lang=
=3D"EN-US"> Dongjie (Jimmy) &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:jie.dong@huawei.com">jie.=
dong@huawei.com</a>&gt;
<br>
<b>Sent:</b> 09 August 2019 08:54<br>
<b>To:</b> Ketan Talaulikar (ketant) &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:ketant@cisco.com=
">ketant@cisco.com</a>&gt;; Susan Hares &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:shares@ndzh.c=
om">shares@ndzh.com</a>&gt;; 'idr wg' &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:idr@ietf.org">i=
dr@ietf.org</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: [Idr] Adoption call for draft-ketant-idr-rfc7752bis-01.=
txt [8/8 to 8/22]<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">Thanks for your prompt feedback.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">In my understanding, RFC7752 defines a general mechanism to distr=
ibute link-state and TE information to the consumer, IGP is just one source=
 of that information. Also please note
 that the text quoted from bgp-ls-epe draft references RFC7752.<o:p></o:p><=
/span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">That said, it may be helpful to add some text in rfc7752bis to in=
dicate that the rules about node/link descriptors are applicable to the pro=
tocol-IDs defined in this document, the
 rules for other protocol-IDs will be defined in documents which introduce =
the protocol-ID.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">Jie<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span lang=3D"EN-US">From:</span></b><span lang=
=3D"EN-US"> Ketan Talaulikar (ketant) [<a href=3D"mailto:ketant@cisco.com">=
mailto:ketant@cisco.com</a>]
<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, August 09, 2019 10:57 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Dongjie (Jimmy) &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:jie.dong@huawei.com">jie.d=
ong@huawei.com</a>&gt;; Susan Hares &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:shares@ndzh.com">=
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<b>Subject:</b> RE: [Idr] Adoption call for draft-ketant-idr-rfc7752bis-01.=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-IN" style=3D"mso-fareast-language:E=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-IN" style=3D"mso-fareast-language:E=
N-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-IN" style=3D"mso-fareast-language:E=
N-US">Thanks for your review and comments.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-IN" style=3D"mso-fareast-language:E=
N-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-IN" style=3D"mso-fareast-language:E=
N-US">Let us note that RFC7752 was about pushing IGP link-state via BGP-LS =
and as such the link descriptors that it mentions are applicable in the sce=
nario where the protocol is OSPF or IS-IS.
 The BGP EPE draft introduced the BGP protocol and specified the link descr=
iptors for BGP peering links use case. As such, RFC7752 and BGP EPE are not=
 in conflict or contradiction with each other.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-IN" style=3D"mso-fareast-language:E=
N-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-IN" style=3D"mso-fareast-language:E=
N-US">This bis draft merely clarifies RFC7752 and is therefore scoped only =
for the IGP link-state propagation via BGP-LS.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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N-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-IN" style=3D"mso-fareast-language:E=
N-US">Thanks,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-IN" style=3D"mso-fareast-language:E=
N-US">Ketan<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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N-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span lang=3D"EN-US">From:</span></b><span lang=
=3D"EN-US"> Idr &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:idr-bounces@ietf.org">idr-bounces@iet=
f.org</a>&gt;
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Dongjie (Jimmy)<br>
<b>Sent:</b> 09 August 2019 08:14<br>
<b>To:</b> Susan Hares &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:shares@ndzh.com">shares@ndzh.c=
om</a>&gt;; 'idr wg' &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:idr@ietf.org">idr@ietf.org</a>&g=
t;<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Idr] Adoption call for draft-ketant-idr-rfc7752bis-01.=
txt [8/8 to 8/22]<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-IN"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">Hi,
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">In general I support the adoption of this document. It helps to c=
larify some confusions in RFC7752, and to solve some issues we realized dur=
ing the progress of subsequent BGP-LS
 extensions.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">And here are the comments I raised on the mic during IDR session =
in Montreal:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">In section 4.2.2 of this -bis document, there are some changes to=
 the encoding rules of link local/remote identifiers in the Link descriptor=
s.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">&#8220;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; If interface and neighbor addresses, ei=
ther IPv4 or IPv6, are<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; present, then the IP address TLVs =
MUST be included and the Link<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Local/Remote Identifiers TLV MUST =
NOT be included in the Link<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Descriptor.&nbsp; The Link Local/R=
emote Identifiers TLV MAY be included<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; in the link attribute when availab=
le.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; If interface and neighbor addresse=
s are not present and the link<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; local/remote identifiers are prese=
nt, then the Link Local/Remote<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Identifiers TLV MUST be included i=
n the Link Descriptor.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">While in draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-19, section 4.2=
, it says:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">&#8220; o&nbsp; Link Descriptors MUST include the following TLV, =
as defined in<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; [RFC7752]:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; *&nbsp; Link Local/Remote Identifi=
ers (TLV 258) contains the 4-octet<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Link Local Ident=
ifier followed by the 4-octet Link Remote<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Identifier.&nbsp=
; The value 0 is used by default when the link<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; remote identifie=
r is unknown.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp; o&nbsp; Additional Link Descriptors TLVs, as defined=
 in [RFC7752], MAY<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; also be included to describe the a=
ddresses corresponding to the<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; link between the BGP routers:<o:p>=
</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; *&nbsp; IPv4 Interface Address (Su=
b-TLV 259) contains the address of<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; the local interf=
ace through which the BGP session is<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; established.&#82=
21;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">Thus it seems the above text in -7752bis is somewhat inconsistent=
 with the bgp-ls-epe draft. Could this be considered in next revision of th=
e bis draft, or the bgp-ls-epe draft?
 Thanks.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D">Jie<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color=
:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span lang=3D"EN-US">From:</span></b><span lang=
=3D"EN-US"> Idr [<a href=3D"mailto:idr-bounces@ietf.org">mailto:idr-bounces=
@ietf.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Susan Hares<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, August 09, 2019 3:31 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> 'idr wg' &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:idr@ietf.org">idr@ietf.org</a>&gt=
;<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Idr] Adoption call for draft-ketant-idr-rfc7752bis-01.txt =
[8/8 to 8/22]<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">This begins a 2 week adoption c=
all for draft-ketant-idr-rfc7752bis-01.txt [8/8 to 8/22/2019]
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">In your comments please indicat=
e &#8220;support&#8221; or &#8220;no support&#8221;.&nbsp;&nbsp;
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">The chair and AD feel that a re=
vision to RFC7752 is needed
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">to specify additional error han=
dling. &nbsp;Please consider
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">if this draft is a good place t=
o start for this revision.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Cheerily, Susan Hares <o:p></o:=
p></span></p>
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