Re: [Idr] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-segment-routing-ext-15: (with COMMENT)

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From: "Ketan Talaulikar (ketant)" <ketant@cisco.com>
To: Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Idr] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-segment-routing-ext-15: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Barry,

Thanks for your review and I've fixed the nit you've pointed to in the version 16 posted :

https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-segment-routing-ext-16


Thanks,
Ketan

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Subject: Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-segment-routing-ext-15: (with COMMENT)

Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-segment-routing-ext-15: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Just an absolute nit in Section 1:

   A segment can
   represent any instruction; topological or service-based.

The semicolon is the wrong punctuation here.  A colon would work, as would a comma or a dash.