[Idr] draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-isis-flood-reflection-04

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Shepherd report for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-isis-flood-reflection-04

Status: Requested WG LC, awaiting confirmation of 2 implementations
Implementations: Unknown, need 2 for WG LC
Implementation Report page:
https://wiki.ietf.org/e/en/group/idr/implementations/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-isis-flood-reflection

draft status: -04 expired (needs -05)

Summary of Review:
Status: Text Ready with Editorial NITS, needs 2 implementations for WG LC

Editorial changes:
NIT-1: section 2, please give reference in [RFC9377] to sub-TLVs mentioned.


Old text:/When describing a node, values
   are derived from the IS-IS Flood Reflection Discovery Sub-TLV.  When
   describing a link, values are derived from the IS-IS Adjacency Sub-
   TLV.  The semantics of any fields within the TLV/sub-TLVs are
   described in [RFC9377]./

New  text:/When describing a node, values
   are derived from the IS-IS Flood Reflection Discovery Sub-TLV
   ([RFC9377], section 4.2).  When describing a link, values are
   derived from the IS-IS Adjacency Sub-TLV ([RFC9377, section 4.4).
   The semantics of any fields within the TLV/sub-TLVs are
   described in [RFC9377]. /


NIT-2: Section 3, references to [RFC9377] fields need to be listed

Old text:/ IS-IS Flood Reflection
   [RFC9377] describes "Tunnel-Based" deployments where an optional
   "Flood Reflection Discovery Tunnel Type Sub-Sub-TLV" is used to
   facilitate the creation of "L1 Shortcuts" (i.e. tunnels) between
   nodes in a Flood Reflection cluster.

old text:/ IS-IS Flood Reflection
   [RFC9377] describes "Tunnel-Based" deployments where an optional
   "Flood Reflection Discovery Tunnel Type Sub-Sub-TLV" (section 4.3)
   is used to facilitate the creation of "L1 Shortcuts" (i.e. tunnels) between
   nodes in a Flood Reflection cluster./