Re: [Idr] draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-app-specific-attr - IPR Call and WG LC (7/14 to 7/29/2020)

["Ketan Talaulikar (ketant)" <[e-mail]>]

Hi All,


Just wanted to share that an updated version with the following changes has just been posted : https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-app-specific-attr-03

Thanks,
Ketan

From: Ketan Talaulikar (ketant)
Sent: 19 July 2020 10:20
To: Acee Lindem (acee) <acee=[e-mail]>; Susan Hares <[e-mail]>; 'idr@ietf. org' <[e-mail]>
Subject: RE: [Idr] draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-app-specific-attr - IPR Call and WG LC (7/14 to 7/29/2020)

Hi Acee,

Thanks for your review and we’ve incorporated all of your comments. These would be included in the next update.

Thanks,
Ketan

From: Idr <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>> On Behalf Of Acee Lindem (acee)
Sent: 19 July 2020 01:58
To: Acee Lindem (acee) <acee=[e-mail]<mailto:acee=[e-mail]>>; Susan Hares <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>; 'idr@ietf. org' <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>
Subject: Re: [Idr] draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-app-specific-attr - IPR Call and WG LC (7/14 to 7/29/2020)

It seems I should apply the same scrutiny to my Emails as I do to draft reviews… 😉
Acee

From: Idr <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>> on behalf of "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee=[e-mail]<mailto:acee=[e-mail]>>
Date: Saturday, July 18, 2020 at 4:14 PM
To: Susan Hares <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>, IDR List <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>
Subject: Re: [Idr] draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-app-specific-attr - IPR Call and WG LC (7/14 to 7/29/2020)

Hi Authors, Sue,

I’ve suggested looks like a lot of changes (see attached). However, many of them are fall into these categories.


1.      Hyphenate application-specific when the term is used as a compound adjective (as we did in the IGP documents).

2.      Use “that” rather than “which” when it introduces a defining clause.

3.      Use “advertised” rather than “sourced” – this is somewhat subjective and I’ll leave it to the discretion of the authors.

In general, I think the details of the procedures are well thought out.

Thanks,
Acee

From: Susan Hares <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>
Date: Tuesday, July 14, 2020 at 8:41 PM
To: Acee Lindem <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>, IDR List <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>
Subject: RE: [Idr] draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-app-specific-attr - IPR Call and WG LC (7/14 to 7/29/2020)

Acee:

Thank you for sending the editorial comments.   I’ve learned from getting Alvaro’s detailed reviews that I want all the editorial comments considered before I sent it into Alvaro.

Sue

From: Acee Lindem (acee) [mailto:[e-mail]]
Sent: Tuesday, July 14, 2020 7:41 PM
To: Susan Hares; 'idr@ietf. org'
Subject: Re: [Idr] draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-app-specific-attr - IPR Call and WG LC (7/14 to 7/29/2020)

Hi Sue,
I support publication. This draft is needed to support the IS-IS and OSPF application-specific attribute drafts on the RFC Queue. I have some editorial comments to align with these documents that I’ll post prior to WG last call end.
Thanks,
Acee

From: Idr <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>> on behalf of Susan Hares <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>
Date: Tuesday, July 14, 2020 at 3:23 PM
To: IDR List <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>
Subject: [Idr] draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-app-specific-attr - IPR Call and WG LC (7/14 to 7/29/2020)

This begins a 2 week WG LC for draft-ietf-bgp-ls-app-specific-attr-02.txt.

You can find the draft at:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-app-specific-attr/

You can find the implementations reports at:
https://trac.ietf.org/trac/idr/wiki/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-app-specific-attr%20implementations

This is a rather short draft (real text about 8 pages), and the

the corresponding OSPF and ISIS drafts have recently approved by the IESG.



Therefore, we are going to combine WG LC and IPR together.



In your comments please consider:

1) Do you feel this draft is ready for publication?



2) Do you know of deployments of these 2 implementations from Cisco?

Are the features useful in these deployments?



3) Do you have any concerns regarding this technology?



Also, please mention support/no support in your reply.



Cheerily, Sue

(co-chair and shepherd for draft).