[Idr] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-bgp-optimal-route-reflection-26: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 17 June 2021 06:10 UTC

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Subject: [Idr] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-bgp-optimal-route-reflection-26: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-idr-bgp-optimal-route-reflection-26: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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I only have one nit to add to what others have pointed out.  In Section 3.1:

* "When specifing logical location ..." -- s/specifing/specifying/

[Idr] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ie… Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker