Re: [Idr] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-18: (with COMMENT)

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From: "Ketan Talaulikar (ketant)" <ketant@cisco.com>
To: Adam Roach <adam@nostrum.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-18: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [Idr] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-18: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Adam,

Thanks for your review. I've accepted and updated the draft for all your editorial comments below.

A v19 of the draft has just been posted which includes these changes along with others that I had pending in my buffer from Alvaro's AD review and other IESG last call reviews.

https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-19 

Thanks,
Ketan

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Subject: Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-18: (with COMMENT)

Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-18: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Thanks for the work that everyone involved has put into this document.
I have only two minor editorial comments.

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§1:

>  This
>  use-case comprises of a centralized controller that learns the BGP

Nit: "This use case is composed of a centralized controller..." or "This use case comprises a centralized controller..."

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§3:

>  his section describes the BGP-LS NLRI encodings that describe the BGP  
> peering and link connectivity between BGP routers.

Nit: "This section..."