Re: [Idr] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-segment-routing-msd-16: (with COMMENT)

Jeff Tantsura <jefftant.ietf@gmail.com> Sun, 26 April 2020 20:13 UTC

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Date: Sun, 26 Apr 2020 13:13:09 -0700
From: Jeff Tantsura <jefftant.ietf@gmail.com>
To: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, Murray Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Idr] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-segment-routing-msd-16: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Murray,

Many thanks for your review!
Please see inline

Cheers,
Jeff
On Apr 25, 2020, 7:35 PM -0700, Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>rg>, wrote:
> Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-segment-routing-msd-16: No Objection
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> Just some nits:
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> Section 1:
> * "... and controller does not participate ..." -- should be "the controller”
[jeff]ack, changed
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> Section 1.1.1:
> * Though the term "PCC" is in this glossary, it is not used anywhere in this document.
[jeff] ack, removed
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> Section 7:
> * "The extensions specified in this document, do not specify ..." -- remove the comma
[jeff] ack, removed
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