Date: Sun, 26 Apr 2020 13:13:09 -0700
From: Jeff Tantsura <jefftant.ietf@gmail.com>
To: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, Murray Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com>
Cc: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-segment-routing-msd@ietf.org, 
 idr-chairs@ietf.org, idr@ietf.org, Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com>, 
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Subject: Re: [Idr] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on
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Hi=C2=A0Murray,

Many thanks for your review=21
Please see inline

Cheers,
Jeff
On Apr 25, 2020, 7:35 PM -0700, Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <noreply=
=40ietf.org>, wrote:
> Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-segment-routing-msd-16: No Objection
>
> When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all
> email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (=46eel free to cut th=
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> introductory paragraph, however.)
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> Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.ht=
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> for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.
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> The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
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msd/
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> COMMENT:
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> Just some nits:
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> Section 1:
> * =22... and controller does not participate ...=22 -- should be =22the=
 controller=E2=80=9D
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> Section 1.1.1:
> * Though the term =22PCC=22 is in this glossary, it is not used anywher=
e in this document.
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> Section 7:
> * =22The extensions specified in this document, do not specify ...=22 -=
- remove the comma
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<div dir=3D=22auto=22>Hi&=23160;Murray,
<div dir=3D=22auto=22><br /></div>
<div dir=3D=22auto=22>Many thanks for your review=21</div>
<div dir=3D=22auto=22>Please see inline</div>
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<div class=3D=22match=46ont=22>Cheers,
<div>Jeff</div>
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<div name=3D=22messageReplySection=22>On Apr 25, 2020, 7:35 PM -0700, Mur=
ray Kucherawy via Datatracker &lt;noreply=40ietf.org&gt;, wrote:<br />
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in: 5px 5px; padding-left: 10px; border-left: thin solid =231abc9c;=22>Mu=
rray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for<br />
draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-segment-routing-msd-16: No Objection<br />
<br />
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all<br =
/>
email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (=46eel free to cut this=
<br />
introductory paragraph, however.)<br />
<br />
<br />
Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html=
<br />
for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.<br />
<br />
<br />
The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:<br />=

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-segment-routing-ms=
d/<br />
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COMMENT:<br />
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Just some nits:<br />
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Section 1:<br />
* =22... and controller does not participate ...=22 -- should be =22the c=
ontroller=E2=80=9D&=23160;<br /></blockquote>
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in: 5px 5px; padding-left: 10px; border-left: thin solid =231abc9c;=22><b=
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Section 1.1.1:<br />
* Though the term =22PCC=22 is in this glossary, it is not used anywhere =
in this document.&=23160;<br /></blockquote>
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Section 7:<br />
* =22The extensions specified in this document, do not specify ...=22 -- =
remove the comma&=23160;<br /></blockquote>
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