[Idr] Shepherd review for draft-ietf-idr-sr-policy-seglist-id-03
Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com> Fri, 21 March 2025 03:00 UTC
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From: Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com>
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Summary
Reviewer: Susan Hares
draft: draft-ietf-idr-sr-policy-seglist-id-03
Type: Proposed Standard
status: WG Draft (published 2/24/2025)
adopted: 11/6/2024
current version: 03
Early Allocation: yes, need early allocation
implementations: H3C and ZTE (2 implementations)
bgp-ls draft: none
Revision -03
Issues from Review of -02
Technical issues resolved: #1 resolved, #2 partially resolved
Technical issues in -03
Issue 1: Security section
old text:/ The security requirements and mechanisms
described in[ draft-ietf-idr-sr-policy-safi] also apply to this document./
Problem: You have added critical information to
[draft-ietf-idr-sr-policy-safi] regarding
seglist-id to the SR Policy information. You need
to discuss how to protect the critical information in
seglist-id.
Issue 2: See the TEA template for Sub-TLV
Please see that you are filling out all the Sub-TLV
template from https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/TEA-templates/SubTLV
Here's what I think you need to add:
1. What tunnel types this sub-TLV can go in
2. Does this sub-TLV play a part in validation of the TLV
3. Can this there be two Sub-TLV in a single TLV?