Re: [Idr] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-app-specific-attr-10

Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.ietf@gmail.com> Tue, 03 May 2022 01:58 UTC

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From: Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 03 May 2022 07:28:15 +0530
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Subject: Re: [Idr] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-app-specific-attr-10
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Hi Russ,

Thanks for your review and we've fixed the nit that you have identified. It
will reflect in the next update.

Thanks,
Ketan


On Tue, May 3, 2022 at 12:38 AM Russ Housley via Datatracker <
noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

> Reviewer: Russ Housley
> Review result: Ready
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
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> For more information, please see the FAQ at
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
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> Document: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-app-specific-attr-10
> Reviewer: Russ Housley
> Review Date: 2022-05-02
> IETF LC End Date: 2022-05-13
> IESG Telechat date: unknown
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> Summary: Ready
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> Major Concerns: None
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> Minor Concerns: None
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> Nits:
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> Section 2: spell out NLRI the first time it is used.
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