[Idr] Second WG LC for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-car-06 (2/16/2024 to 3/1/2024) - partial shepherd report
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I've attached a text file with a partial shepherd report for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-car-06. [file name: CAR-v06-shepherd-report-v6a.txt] It contains 3 out of the four shepherd sections (denoted G1, G2, G3, G4) G1-Editorial comments on procedures (Mandatory to change) G2-Editorial comments on IANA procedures (Mandatory to change) G3-Editorial comments on normative text (optional, but recommended) G4-Editorial comments on appendices (optional, but recommended) These comments will be loaded into github as 4 summary issues. If you wish to receive instruction on how to read the reports on github, please let me know. The number of editorial comments are as follows: G1- 15 comments G2 - 2 comments G3 - 37 comments. G4 - not completed yet I will complete the G4 section of the review on Monday. If you want me to send the text as a single email message or 4 separate email messages, drop me a note. I'll be glad to the text file as Cheerily, Sue Hares CAR Shepherd