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[Idr] Re: draft-ietf-idr-sr-policy-path-segment-10 - Early Allocations

Cheng Li <c.l@huawei.com> Tue, 25 June 2024 15:54 UTC

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From: Cheng Li <c.l@huawei.com>
To: Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com>, "idr@ietf.org" <idr@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-idr-sr-policy-path-segment@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-idr-sr-policy-path-segment@ietf.org>
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Hi Sue，

Thank you so much for your help, and sorry for my delay.  We have updated the draft to address your comments below.
Please see : https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-idr-sr-policy-path-segment-10&url2=draft-ietf-idr-sr-policy-path-segment-11&difftype=--html

Thanks,
Cheng


From: Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com>
Sent: Friday, June 7, 2024 3:50 PM
To: idr@ietf.org; draft-ietf-idr-sr-policy-path-segment@ietf.org
Subject: draft-ietf-idr-sr-policy-path-segment-10 - Early Allocations


Greetings:

Your request for early allocation cannot be processed at this time.
[draft-ietf-idr-sr-policy-safi-04]
(https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-idr-sr-policy-safi/)

has not been approved by the IESG, so values for registry for
SR Policy Segment List Sub-TLVs cannot be assigned.


Codepoint   Description                     Reference

----------  ------------------------------  -------------

TBA1 (16)   Path Segment sub-TLV            This document

TBA2 (17)   Reverse Segment List sub-TLV    This document

When the registry is created, I will recommend the following two values be assigned.
https://wiki.ietf.org/e/en/group/idr/Early-Allocation-Status

Please make the following editorial changes to your document:

Introduction:
Text: / Further more, in

   some scenarios, (e.g., Mobile backhaul transport networks), there are

   Requirements to support bidirectional path./


New text: / In some scenarios (e.g., Mobile backhaul transport networks), there are

   Requirements to support bidirectional path./



Why: The “Further more” is unnecessary, incorrectly spelled, and makes text difficult to read.




Section 3.1


Current: / *  Type: to be assigned by IANA./



New: / *  Type (TBD1): SR Path Segment Sub-TLV (to be assigned by IANA)./





Section 4.1


Current: / *  Type: to be assigned by IANA./



New: / *  Type (TBD2): Reverse Path Segment List Sub-TLV (to be assigned by IANA)./



Codepoint   Description                     Reference

----------  ------------------------------  -------------

TBA1 (14)   Path Segment sub-TLV            This document

TBA2 (15)   Reverse Segment List sub-TLV    This document







Cheerily, Susan Hares

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