[Idr] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-segment-routing-msd-16: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sun, 26 April 2020 02:35 UTC

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Subject: [Idr] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-segment-routing-msd-16: (with COMMENT)
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Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-segment-routing-msd-16: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Just some nits:

Section 1:
* "... and controller does not participate ..." -- should be "the controller"

Section 1.1.1:
* Though the term "PCC" is in this glossary, it is not used anywhere in this document.

Section 7:
* "The extensions specified in this document, do not specify ..." -- remove the comma