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Shepherd report for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-link-mtu-07

Status: WG Document
Implementations: Unknown, need 2 for WG LC
draft status: Needs

Summary of Review: Needs -08 prior to WG LC
Status: Needs to resolve 4 technical issues and 1 editorial.

Technical issues:

1. Please replace [RFC7752] with [RFC9552]

2. Introduction, paragraph 5, fix reference to [RFC9085]

Old text:/
   [I-D.ietf-idr-bgp-ls-segment-routing-ext] defines SR extensions to
   BGP-LS and specifies the TLVs and sub-TLVs for advertising SR
   information. /
New text:/
   [RFC9085] defines SR extensions to
   BGP-LS and specifies the TLVs and sub-TLVs for advertising SR
   information.

3. Security Section.

Link MTU provides proprietary information regarding a network.
See security section in draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-sr-policy-05
for consideration.

Please consider adding many of the points from this section include:
1) security consideration for [RFC9552], Trusted environment of
BGP-LS [RFC8402], and confidentiality of MTU data.

4. Fix the references


Editorial changes:
Change-1 Abstract, paragraph 2, remove

The abstract needs to be 2 paragraphs.  Please just remove paragraph 2.

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