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John and Alvaro:=20

Do you want me to do a complete new shepherd review at this point? =20

Cheers, Sue=20

-----Original Message-----
From: Alvaro Retana [mailto:aretana.ietf@gmail.com]=20
Sent: Thursday, September 17, 2020 6:18 PM
To: John Scudder
Cc: idr-chairs@ietf.org; idr@ietf. org; =
draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps@ietf.org
Subject: Re: AD Review of draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps-15

On September 11, 2020 at 11:25:31 AM, John Scudder wrote:

John:

Hi!

Just a couple of comments...  Just one actionable change related to the =
reachability issue: you're right, we should move on.

Thanks!

Alvaro.



...
> > ...
> >> We added 5566 and 5640 to the list of obsoleted RFCs, along with an =

> >> explanation.
> >
> > [major] The IANA assignments made for those RFCs need to be declared =

> > obsolete in the IANA Considerations section.
>
> Is =E2=80=9Cobsolete=E2=80=9D an IANA thing? I=E2=80=99ve added a =
subsection to the IANA=20
> section as requested, but asked them to mark the code points as =
=E2=80=9Cdeprecated=E2=80=9D.


Yes, "obsolete" is an IANA thing. rfc8126: "Specific entries in a =
registry can be marked as "obsolete" (no longer in use) or "deprecated" =
(use is not recommended)."

You used both terms in =C2=A713.1 to refer to the code points.  You're =
right, deprecating is the right action, but IANA may be confused by the =
use of both.  This is a minor point, so we can wait for them to ask =
about it. :-)



...
> >>> 1054 4.2. Router's MAC Extended Community
> >
> > [] We've been talking about this section in a separate message...
>
> OK. To loop the WG in on the conclusion of that, it appears that=20
> draft-ietf-bess-evpn-inter-subnet-forwarding only allows a single=20
> Router=E2=80=99s MAC (authors have been asked to clarify) so assuming =
that=E2=80=99s=20
> right, we must pick one or the other if it=E2=80=99s encoded twice in =
two ways=20
> with different values. In -18 I=E2=80=99ve changed the text to say =
=E2=80=9Cuse the=20
> EC=E2=80=9D instead of the former =E2=80=9Cuse the sub-TLV=E2=80=9D.

FYI...

I have a DISCUSS on draft-ietf-bess-evpn-inter-subnet-forwarding
precisely due to the lack of sync with this document.  I hope that the =
authors provide an answer and align with the changes here.




> >>> 1080 5. Semantics and Usage of the Tunnel Encapsulation attribute
...

> All of this is true. Basically, we can either hang progress of this=20
> document up for a potentially long time waiting for something that may =

> never come: a detailed specification of exactly when a route is, and=20
> isn=E2=80=99t, resolvable, or we can admit it=E2=80=99s an imperfect =
world and move=20
> forward. I will observe that despite 4271=E2=80=99s lack of =
prescriptiveness,=20
> somehow we have many interoperable implementations of BGP. I suspect=20
> this is because when an implementor looks at route resolution, =
it=E2=80=99s a=20
> little like Justice Potter Stewart looking at other material: =
=E2=80=9C[I=20
> can=E2=80=99t define it but] I know it when I see it.=E2=80=9D
>
> I tried to make the paragraph clearer by adding a final clause. The=20
> last sentence now reads, "The reachability condition is evaluated as=20
> per [RFC4271], but the essence is that if the router could forward a=20
> packet addressed to the IP address, the IP address is =
"reachable=E2=80=9D.=E2=80=9D We=20
> could absolutely pick this short summary to shreds if we chose =
=E2=80=94 see=20
> above. It=E2=80=99s not meant to be prescriptive, only descriptive.


Ok.

Let's go with an "intermediate" approach, so that we don't try to say =
too much, but (hopefully) say enough:

NEW>
   *  The tunnel is specified in a TLV whose Tunnel Egress Endpoint =
sub-TLV
      identifies an IP address that is reachable.  The reachability =
condition
      is evaluated as per [RFC4271].  If the IP address is reachable via
      more than one forwarding table, local policy is used to determine
      which table to use.

