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IDR WG:

Due to feedback from the IDR WG regarding IETF meeting time,
the IDR chairs have started to hold an interim for
BGP-LS and SR drafts before each IETF meeting.

September 9 at 10:00-12:00 EDT is the BGP-LS and SR
Interim before IETF-121.  If you want to request WG adoption
of your draft during September, October, or November,
you must request to present your draft at this Interim meeting.

Just a reminder, before an adoption call you need to have
an IDR WG shepherd (usually an IDR co-chair) review your draft.

Below is information on Allocation of SR Sub-TLVs and a brief
Review of 10 individual drafts related to BGP-LS proposed for IDR.

Cheerily, Sue Hares

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Allocation Information
Segment Routing Sub-TLVs are still under early Allocation.
This meeting will propose an allocation method for
Segment routing Sub-TLVs.

For the BGP-LS individual drafts, most BGP-LS parameter
assignments are already under expert review. Therefore,
allocation is not covered at this meeting.

Reviews of 10 BGP-LS drafts


  1.  draft-chen-idr-bgp-ls-algo-related-adjacency-sid-04

Please do the following things prior to requesting
pre-adoption shepherd's review of your draft:


  1.  Please update this draft to the latest version of the document.
   Please note that draft-peng-idr-segment-routing-te-policy-attr
   has been adopted as draft-ietf-idr-sr-te-policy-attr.


  1.  Please verify that the lsr WG reference are correct, and the

these documents have been adopted by lsr.


  1.  Please carefully define all parameters to specific lengths.
  2.  If You have a reserved flag, please indicate set to zero and ignored =
upon reception.
  3.  Please check your efforts align with [RFC9552],

Draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-sr-policy.


  1.  draft-chen-idr-bgp-ls-security-capability-03

Please do the following things prior to requesting
pre-adoption shepherd's review of your draft:


  1.  Please reduce your abstract to 2 paragraphs.
  2.  Please reduce your introduction to new points about

BGP-LS not found in [RFC9552]

  1.  Section 2.2 - please explain what adding the

Security capability attribute does for these features.

BGP-LS is reading the security attribute.

  1.  Once you explain the mechanisms, then you must explain why it

is needed for each place you want to add it.

Please note, this must be proven from a security perspective.


  1.  draft-chen-idr-bgp-ls-sr-policy-cp-validity-01

Please do the following things prior to requesting
pre-adoption shepherd's review of your draft:


  1.  Please update your drafts to the latest revision.

[draft-ietf-idr-te-lsp-distribution] is replaced by

[draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-te-path] and

[draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-sr-policy]


     Please update [RFC7752] to [RFC9552]


  1.  Please indicate why the CP Validity Sub-TLV

adds value to the BGP-LS stream by giving the

count of segments in a segment list.

Please adjust your text to indicate BGP-LS is read-only.



  1.  Please augment your procedures to indicate what happens

If the information is not available.



  1.  Please add a security section.


  1.  draft-chen-idr-bgp-ls-transport-slide-06

This draft overlaps with the adopted IDR draft:
draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-sr-policy-nrp-00.

What is different with this draft?


  1.  draft-dong-idr-bgp-ls-scalable-nrp-01

This extension describes hierarchy in the
NRP.  This is a valuable addition to the NRP
Mechanisms.

Should this material be added to the draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-sr-policy-nrp?


  1.  draft-li-idr-bgpls-sr-policy-composite-path-06

This draft deals with the composite candidate path.

Please do the following things prior to requesting
pre-adoption shepherd's review of your draft:


  1.  update references to the appropriate latest drafts or RFCs,
  2.  Indicate how the Constituents SR Policy TLV is stored and used in ope=
rational BGP.
  3.  Add substantial text about the security considerations of a composite=
 SR Policy.

Please note that composite SR Policy have a different attack vector than
the explicit segment lists.



  1.  draft-lin-idr-bgp-ls-te-policy-pm

Please do the following things prior to requesting
pre-adoption shepherd's review of your draft:


  1.  Upgrade your references to BGP-LS to [RFC9552]
  2.  Provide an introduction and
  3.  Provide a Security section that deals with the

BGP-LS distributing the critical information

about a network's performance.


  1.  Draft-liu-idr-bgpls-sr-p2mp-policy-distribution

Please plan to talk to the authors of
draft-ietf-idr-sr-p2mp-policy.

I noticed that the authors for this draft are
Yisong Liu, Changwang Lin, Hooman Bidgoli, and Sandy Zhang,

I noticed that the authors for
draft-ietf-idr-sr-p2mp-policy are
Hooman Bidgoli, Daniel Voyer, Andrew Stone, Rishabh Parekh, Serge Krier, an=
d Swadesh Agrawal.

This draft should align with the mechanism and
Information in draft-ietf-idr-sr-p2mp-policy.


  1.  Draft-liu-idr-bgp-ls-srp-flexible-path-selection-00

I notice that the draft-liu-spring-sr-policy-flexible-path-selection
Adds parameters for the dynamic path switching.

Is this dynamic path switching between existing explicit Candidate paths or
Composite Candidate paths?  Or are these parameters of dynamic Candidate Pa=
ths?

This concept needs to be further defined in Spring WG. After getting the
Spring work completed, this draft should have the following changes:


  1.  Give [RFC9256] reference for type of Candidate paths
  2.  Add [RFC9552] reference
  3.  Explain carefully what type of Candidate Paths (explicit, dynamic, or=
 composite)

This applies to

  1.  Explain the mechanism careful,
  2.  Give the SubTLVs


  1.  Draft-tong-idr-bgp-ls-savenet-00

The IDR chairs are discussing SAVNET with SAVNET authors.
The authors should contact the IDR Co-chairs to discuss
Why a Subnet identifier is being queried with BGP-LS.

We are examining all BGP related SAVNET drafts prior to IETF-121/

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IDR WG:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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Due to feedback from the IDR WG regarding IETF meeting time,
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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the IDR chairs have started to hold an interim for
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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BGP-LS and SR drafts before each IETF meeting.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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September 9 at 10:00-12:00 EDT is the BGP-LS and SR
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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Interim before IETF-121. &nbsp;If you want to request WG adoption
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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of your draft during September, October, or November,
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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you must request to present your draft at this Interim meeting. &nbsp;<o:p>=
</o:p></span></p>
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<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
Just a reminder, before an adoption call you need to have
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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an IDR WG shepherd (usually an IDR co-chair) review your draft.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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Below is information on Allocation of SR Sub-TLVs and a brief
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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Review of 10 individual drafts related to BGP-LS proposed for IDR.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
Cheerily, Sue Hares<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot=
;">Allocation Information
<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
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Segment Routing Sub-TLVs are still under early Allocation.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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This meeting will propose an allocation method for
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
Segment routing Sub-TLVs.&nbsp;
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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For the BGP-LS individual drafts, most BGP-LS parameter
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
assignments are already under expert review. Therefore,
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
allocation is not covered at this meeting.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot=
;">Reviews of 10 BGP-LS drafts<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
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<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<ol style=3D"margin-top:0in" start=3D"1" type=3D"1">
<li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:-.25in;mso-list:l10 lev=
el1 lfo1">
<span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">draft-chen-idr-bgp-ls-a=
lgo-related-adjacency-sid-04
<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
Please do the following things prior to requesting
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
pre-adoption shepherd&#8217;s review of your draft:
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<ol style=3D"margin-top:0in" start=3D"1" type=3D"a">
<li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:-.25in;mso-list:l3 leve=
l1 lfo5"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Please update =
this draft to the latest version of the document.
<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Please note that draft-peng-idr-segment-routing-te-policy=
-attr
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;has been adopted as draft-ietf-idr-sr-te-policy-attr.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<ol style=3D"margin-top:0in" start=3D"2" type=3D"a">
<li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:-.25in;mso-list:l3 leve=
l1 lfo5"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Please verify =
that the lsr WG reference are correct, and the
<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"fo=
nt-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">these documents have been adopted by lsr=
.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<ol style=3D"margin-top:0in" start=3D"3" type=3D"a">
<li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:-.25in;mso-list:l3 leve=
l1 lfo5"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Please careful=
ly define all parameters to specific lengths.<o:p></o:p></span></li><li cla=
ss=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:-.25in;mso-list:l3 level1 lfo5=
"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">If You have a reserve=
d flag, please indicate set to zero and ignored upon reception. &nbsp;<o:p>=
</o:p></span></li><li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:-.25i=
n;mso-list:l3 level1 lfo5"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quo=
t;">Please check your efforts align with [RFC9552],<o:p></o:p></span></li><=
/ol>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"fo=
nt-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-sr-policy.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<ol style=3D"margin-top:0in" start=3D"2" type=3D"1">
<li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:-.25in;mso-list:l10 lev=
el1 lfo1">
<span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">draft-chen-idr-bgp-ls-s=
ecurity-capability-03
<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
Please do the following things prior to requesting
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
pre-adoption shepherd&#8217;s review of your draft:
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<ol style=3D"margin-top:0in" start=3D"1" type=3D"a">
<li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:0in;mso-list:l6 level1 =
lfo6"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Please reduce you=
r abstract to 2 paragraphs.&nbsp;
<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:=
0in;mso-list:l6 level1 lfo6"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&q=
uot;">Please reduce your introduction to new points about
<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&=
quot;">BGP-LS not found in [RFC9552]<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<ol style=3D"margin-top:0in" start=3D"3" type=3D"a">
<li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:0in;mso-list:l6 level1 =
lfo6"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Section 2.2 &#821=
1; please explain what adding the
<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&=
quot;">Security capability attribute does for these features. &nbsp;&nbsp;<=
o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&=
quot;">BGP-LS is reading the security attribute.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<ol style=3D"margin-top:0in" start=3D"4" type=3D"a">
<li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:0in;mso-list:l6 level1 =
lfo6"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Once you explain =
the mechanisms, then you must explain why it
<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&=
quot;">is needed for each place you want to add it.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
Please note, this must be proven from a security perspective.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<ol style=3D"margin-top:0in" start=3D"3" type=3D"1">
<li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:-.25in;mso-list:l10 lev=
el1 lfo1">
<span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">draft-chen-idr-bgp-ls-s=
r-policy-cp-validity-01<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
Please do the following things prior to requesting
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
pre-adoption shepherd&#8217;s review of your draft:
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<ol style=3D"margin-top:0in" start=3D"1" type=3D"a">
<li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:0in;mso-list:l5 level1 =
lfo7"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Please update you=
r drafts to the latest revision.
<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&=
quot;">[draft-ietf-idr-te-lsp-distribution] is replaced by<o:p></o:p></span=
></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&=
quot;">[draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-te-path] and
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&=
quot;">[draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-sr-policy]<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&=
quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Please update [RFC7752] to [RFC9552] &nbsp;<o:p></=
o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<ol style=3D"margin-top:0in" start=3D"2" type=3D"a">
<li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:0in;mso-list:l5 level1 =
lfo7"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Please indicate w=
hy the CP Validity Sub-TLV
<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&=
quot;">adds value to the BGP-LS stream by giving the
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&=
quot;">count of segments in a segment list.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&=
quot;">Please adjust your text to indicate BGP-LS is read-only.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&=
quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<ol style=3D"margin-top:0in" start=3D"3" type=3D"a">
<li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:0in;mso-list:l5 level1 =
lfo7"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Please augment yo=
ur procedures to indicate what happens
<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&=
quot;">If the information is not available.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&=
quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<ol style=3D"margin-top:0in" start=3D"4" type=3D"a">
<li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:0in;mso-list:l5 level1 =
lfo7"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Please add a secu=
rity section.
<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<ol style=3D"margin-top:0in" start=3D"4" type=3D"1">
<li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:-.25in;mso-list:l10 lev=
el1 lfo1">
<span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">draft-chen-idr-bgp-ls-t=
ransport-slide-06 <o:p>
</o:p></span></li></ol>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">This draft overlaps with the adopted IDR draft:
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-sr-policy-nrp-00.<o:p></o=
:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">What is different with this draft?
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<ol style=3D"margin-top:0in" start=3D"5" type=3D"1">
<li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:-.25in;mso-list:l10 lev=
el1 lfo1">
<span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">draft-dong-idr-bgp-ls-s=
calable-nrp-01 <o:p>
</o:p></span></li></ol>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">This extension describes hierarchy in the
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">NRP.&nbsp; This is a valuable addition to the N=
RP
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Mechanisms.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Should this material be added to the draft-ietf=
-idr-bgp-ls-sr-policy-nrp? &nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<ol style=3D"margin-top:0in" start=3D"6" type=3D"1">
<li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:-.25in;mso-list:l10 lev=
el1 lfo1">
<span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">draft-li-idr-bgpls-sr-p=
olicy-composite-path-06
<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">This draft deals with the composite candidate p=
ath.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
Please do the following things prior to requesting
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
pre-adoption shepherd&#8217;s review of your draft:
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<ol style=3D"margin-top:0in" start=3D"1" type=3D"a">
<li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:0in;mso-list:l2 level1 =
lfo9"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">update references=
 to the appropriate latest drafts or RFCs,
<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:=
0in;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo9"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&q=
uot;">Indicate how the Constituents SR Policy TLV is stored and used in ope=
rational BGP.<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D=
"margin-left:0in;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo9"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;=
Courier New&quot;">Add substantial text about the security considerations o=
f a composite SR Policy.
<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Please note that composite SR Policy have a dif=
ferent attack vector than
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">the explicit segment lists.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<ol style=3D"margin-top:0in" start=3D"7" type=3D"1">
<li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:-.25in;mso-list:l10 lev=
el1 lfo1">
<span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">draft-lin-idr-bgp-ls-te=
-policy-pm<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
Please do the following things prior to requesting
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
pre-adoption shepherd&#8217;s review of your draft:
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<ol style=3D"margin-top:0in" start=3D"1" type=3D"a">
<li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:0in;mso-list:l1 level1 =
lfo10"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Upgrade your ref=
erences to BGP-LS to [RFC9552]<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class=3D"MsoListPa=
ragraph" style=3D"margin-left:0in;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo10"><span style=3D"=
font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Provide an introduction and
<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:=
0in;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo10"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&=
quot;">Provide a Security section that deals with the
<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&=
quot;">BGP-LS distributing the critical information
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&=
quot;">about a network&#8217;s performance.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<ol style=3D"margin-top:0in" start=3D"8" type=3D"1">
<li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:-.25in;mso-list:l10 lev=
el1 lfo1">
<span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Draft-liu-idr-bgpls-sr-=
p2mp-policy-distribution
<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Please plan to talk to the authors of<o:p></o:p=
></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">draft-ietf-idr-sr-p2mp-policy.<o:p></o:p></span=
></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">I noticed that the authors for this draft are<o=
:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Yisong Liu, Changwang Lin, Hooman Bidgoli, and =
Sandy Zhang,
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">I noticed that the authors for
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">draft-ietf-idr-sr-p2mp-policy are<o:p></o:p></s=
pan></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Hooman Bidgoli, Daniel Voyer, Andrew Stone, Ris=
habh Parekh, Serge Krier, and Swadesh Agrawal.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">This draft should align with the mechanism and
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Information in draft-ietf-idr-sr-p2mp-policy.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<ol style=3D"margin-top:0in" start=3D"9" type=3D"1">
<li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:-.25in;mso-list:l10 lev=
el1 lfo1">
<span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Draft-liu-idr-bgp-ls-sr=
p-flexible-path-selection-00
<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">I notice that the draft-liu-spring-sr-policy-fl=
exible-path-selection
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Adds parameters for the dynamic path switching.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Is this dynamic path switching between existing=
 explicit Candidate paths or
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Composite Candidate paths?&nbsp; Or are these p=
arameters of dynamic Candidate Paths? &nbsp;&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">This concept needs to be further defined in Spr=
ing WG. After getting the
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Spring work completed, this draft should have t=
he following changes:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<ol style=3D"margin-top:0in" start=3D"1" type=3D"a">
<li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:0in;mso-list:l4 level1 =
lfo11"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Give [RFC9256] r=
eference for type of Candidate paths<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class=3D"Mso=
ListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:0in;mso-list:l4 level1 lfo11"><span sty=
le=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Add [RFC9552] reference<o:p></o:=
p></span></li><li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:0in;mso-l=
ist:l4 level1 lfo11"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Ex=
plain carefully what type of Candidate Paths (explicit, dynamic, or composi=
te)
<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&=
quot;">This applies to
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<ol style=3D"margin-top:0in" start=3D"4" type=3D"a">
<li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:0in;mso-list:l4 level1 =
lfo11"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Explain the mech=
anism careful,
<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:=
0in;mso-list:l4 level1 lfo11"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&=
quot;">Give the SubTLVs
<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<ol style=3D"margin-top:0in" start=3D"10" type=3D"1">
<li class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:-.25in;mso-list:l10 lev=
el1 lfo1">
<span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Draft-tong-idr-bgp-ls-s=
avenet-00 <o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
<o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">The IDR chairs are discussing SAVNET with SAVNE=
T authors.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">The authors should contact the IDR Co-chairs to=
 discuss
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">Why a Subnet identifier is being queried with B=
GP-LS.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.25in"><span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:&quot;Courier New&quot;">We are examining all BGP related SAVNET drafts =
prior to IETF-121/<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">=
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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