Re: [Idr] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-17

"Susan Hares" <shares@ndzh.com> Fri, 30 November 2018 13:30 UTC

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Sheng:

The IDR work group is grateful for your review.  I'm pleased that the document is in such great shape!

Sue Hares 

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From: Sheng Jiang [mailto:jiangsheng@huawei.com] 
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Subject: Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-17

Reviewer: Sheng Jiang
Review result: Ready

Hi, OPS-DIR, Authors,

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

This standard track document describes an extension to BGP Link State (BGP-LS) for advertisement of BGP Peering Segments along with their BGP peering node information.  This document is clear and well written. It is READY for publication.

Major issue: no.

Minor issue: no.

Regards,

Sheng