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Re: [Idr] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid-14: (with COMMENT)

"Juan Alcaide (jalcaide)" <jalcaide@cisco.com> Tue, 18 May 2021 19:10 UTC

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From: "Juan Alcaide (jalcaide)" <jalcaide@cisco.com>
To: "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Idr] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid-14: (with COMMENT)
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Thanks Eric for your comments. I'll incorporate them. 

I would use ' Section 6 of [RFC8955] states:'

But is there any format to refer to an RFC + specific section of that RFC


I used ' validation procedure specified in <xref target="RFC8955" />, section 6'
and in https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid-14  it's using the wrong hyperlink.

Should I just remove the ",",  and do  '[RFC8955] section 6 states:' ?

-J


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Subject: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid-14: (with COMMENT)

Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid-14: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Thank you for the work put into this document.

Special thanks to Susan Hares for her recent and detailed shepherd's write up.

Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would be appreciated).

I hope that this helps to improve the document,

Regards,

-éric

== COMMENTS ==

Is there any reason why the shepherd is not acknowledged in the document ?

-- Section 2 --
Strongly suggest s/protocol port numbers/protocol or port numbers/

Please expand "RR" at first use.

-- Section 4.2 --
Suggest to add also a reference to section 4 of RFC 8955 rather than "[RFC8955] states:"

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