[Idr] Kathleen Moriarty's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-as-migration-03: (with COMMENT)

"Kathleen Moriarty" <Kathleen.Moriarty.ietf@gmail.com> Wed, 18 February 2015 01:36 UTC

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Subject: [Idr] Kathleen Moriarty's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-as-migration-03: (with COMMENT)
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Kathleen Moriarty has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-idr-as-migration-03: No Objection

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It seems like a good idea to document these features.  I found a couple
of nits you might want to fix:

ASN is first expanded in section 1.2.  Although it is a well known
acronym, you might want to expand it on first use instead.

Section 4.1. what is "NB:"?