[Idr] Shepherd review for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-srmpls-elp-02
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Type: Proposed Standard status: WG Draft adopted: 8/12/2024 (7/12/2024 - 7/30/2024) current version: 02 Early Allocation: yes, but need to revised draft prior to allocation implementations: H3C and ZTE (2 implementations) bgp-ls draft: none Reviewer: Susan Hares Review of -02 draft: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-srmpls-elp-02<https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-srmpls-elp-02> Status: Need to address technicval issues Technical issues All Technical Issue from -01 review are unresolved Unresolved from Review-01: * Issue #1 - Section 3, paragraph starting "For example". BGP-LS reference - is unresolved * Issue #2 - Section 4 or 5, Missing Error handling for a malformed Explicit NULL Policy TLV * Issue #3 - Security Section, Please enhance the security section. Mention Critical information. * Issue #4 - Missing Scalability considerations for this work. Link to review on IDR wiki https://wiki.ietf.org/group/idr/Shepherd-SR-BGP-LS/BGP-SR/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-sr-mpls-elp Cheerily, Sue Hares