[Idr] Some editorial issues related to draft-ietf-idr-segment-routing-te-policy-04
Zhuangshunwan <zhuangshunwan@huawei.com> Sat, 08 September 2018 09:01 UTC
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Subject: [Idr] Some editorial issues related to draft-ietf-idr-segment-routing-te-policy-04
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Dear authors, Thank you for providing a good document for us. There may be some editorial issues in this document. Page 14 of draft-ietf-idr-segment-routing-te-policy-04 has the following texts: Type 1: SID only, in the form of MPLS Label Type 2: SID only, in the form of IPv6 address Type 3: IPv4 Node Address with optional SID Type 4: IPv6 Node Address with optional SID for SR MPLS Type 5: IPv4 Address + index with optional SID Type 6: IPv4 Local and Remote addresses with optional SID Type 7: IPv6 Address + index for local and remote pair with optional SID for SR MPLS Type 8: IPv6 Local and Remote addresses with optional SID for SR MPLS Type 9: IPv6 Node Address with optional SID for SRv6 Type 10: IPv6 Address + index for local and remote pair with optional SID for SRv6 Type 11: IPv6 Local and Remote addresses for SRv6 Since "Type 9" has been assigned to Weight Sub-TLV per draft-ietf-idr-segment-routing-te-policy-04, so above texts would be as follows: Type 1: SID only, in the form of MPLS Label Type 2: SID only, in the form of IPv6 address Type 3: IPv4 Node Address with optional SID Type 4: IPv6 Node Address with optional SID for SR MPLS Type 5: IPv4 Address + index with optional SID Type 6: IPv4 Local and Remote addresses with optional SID Type 7: IPv6 Address + index for local and remote pair with optional SID for SR MPLS Type 8: IPv6 Local and Remote addresses with optional SID for SR MPLS Type 10: IPv6 Node Address with optional SID for SRv6 Type 11: IPv6 Address + index for local and remote pair with optional SID for SRv6 Type 12: IPv6 Local and Remote addresses for SRv6 If I don't understand it correctly, please give me some help. Thanks, Shunwan
- [Idr] Some editorial issues related to draft-ietf… Zhuangshunwan
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