[Idr] Shepherd's review of draft-chen-idr-bgp-sr-policy-cp-validity-02
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Ran, Detao, Ketan, Yisong, Changwang: Below is my shepherd’s review for: draft-chen-idr-bgp-sr-policy-cp-valid The authors requested adoption in spring draft for the related draft: draft-chen-spring-sr-policy-cp-validity. Do you know when the Spring adoption is to occur? Are you planning to ask for WG Adoption of this draft after draft-chen-spring-sr-policy-cp-validity has been adopted in spring? Please make the changes below before asking for IDR WG adoption. Cheerily, Sue Hares =========== Shepherd Review for: draft-chen-idr-bgp-sr-policy-cp-validity-02 status: Individual draft, expired Status: Proposed Standard, version: revision needed (-03) implementations: unknown Authors: 5 Shepherd Detailed review Summary: status: Individual draft, expired Status: Proposed Standard, version: revision needed (-03) implementations: unknown Authors: 5 Shepherd Detailed review Summary: Needs -03 due to out-of-date references + Security section Issue-1: Spring References: draft-chen-spring-sr-policy-cp-validity requested WG adoption 7/26. What is the status of the WG adoptoin. Issue-2: Section 2 paragraph 1, wrong document reference. Please replace draft-ietf-idr-segment-routing-te-policy with draft-ietf-idr-sr-policy-safi. Issue-3: section 3, length definition, fixed as 6 The total length must be 6. Please address this in your next text. Issue-4: Section 4, wrong document reference Please replace draft-ietf-idr-segment-routing-te-policy with draft-ietf-idr-sr-policy-safi. Issue-5: Section 6, [draft-ietf-idr-sr-policy-safi] calls out the protection of critical information. CP Validity Sub-TLV is a critical pieces of information. Please add text that indicates this point. It will help you read the latest version of draft-ietf-idr-sr-policy-safi. Editorial review: NIT-1: section 1, paragraph 1, sentence 1 Problem: English verb-subject tense alignment old text:/ SR Policy architecture are specified in [RFC9256]. / new text:/ SR Policy architecture is specified in [RFC9256]. /