[Idr] QA review of draft-ietf-idr-te-pm-bgp-03

Stewart Bryant <stewart.bryant@gmail.com> Fri, 10 June 2016 16:25 UTC

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From: Stewart Bryant <stewart.bryant@gmail.com>
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Subject: [Idr] QA review of draft-ietf-idr-te-pm-bgp-03
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I was asked to do a QA review of draft-ietf-idr-te-pm-bgp-03

This is a short, simple, well written draft that integrates two
existing technologies.

It is ready to move onto its next stage.

The only (minor) observation that I would make, is that
the front page author list is longer than is normally
acceptable by the IESG.

Assuming that all the TLVs that are needed are included,
the draft looks about finished.

- Stewart